| "A Tale of Two Pussies" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: hhmmm....
Reviewed By: fallen_heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2005 03:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
well i have read alot of hentao fics before..i better be honest...it a very mid-class hentai fic...i now you will make a better one...i cant believe you accutualy used la blue girl...as a reader i will find that bad...well just good luck on your next fic.....you just pass...for my point of view...
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Reviewed By: Aoluamo On: April 08, 2005 17:22 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The first one was great, but I hated the way that you changed to "shampoo's journal" and I found it much better before you started putting in charactors from other animes. Over all good. Try to stick to Nabiki's journal. Those bits are sweet.
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Reviewed By: fushigiyugifan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2005 02:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is exactly like the first one the beggining was a litte different but other than that its exactly the same as the very first episode of la blue girl
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Reviewed By: Inu-girl1234567890 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2004 21:30 CST
Comment/Review:
perv yet hilarious
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Reviewed By: Medatsu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2004 09:36 CST
Comment/Review:
YOU HAVE NO REVIEWS ON THIS!!! O.O... thats inpossible..well im sorry i didn't review b4...I printed the chapters and read them all the time...Your an excelent writter...Fablous Lemons!!!
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