Reviewed By: Skayda [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2003 08:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Everything about this story was just beautiful. You've captured Piccolo and Ryven's emotions perfectly and I always loved how you write from Piccolo's POV. Plus, I can picture everything happening as if I am recalling a movie seen on a screen. You have a way with discriptions without being overly discriptive. :)
Your friend,
~Ami |
