| "What I Didn't Know" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: FairyMage [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2005 03:52 CDT
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OoOoOoO I love this story so much! All the emotion you've put in... plus Toya's search for his identity is all so amazing! Please please please update and finish! I'm begging! -begs- My awe surpasses all words... I can't even tell you how amazing I think this fic is!
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Reviewed By: FairyMage [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2005 02:41 CDT
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-SQUEE!!!- TOYA-KUN!!! Oh my gosh... just the first chapter was amazing! It wasn't at all grammatically or otherwise screwed up! And Toya's feelings were conveyed so vividly and beautifully... I love the way you describe how he feels towards the other characters, and how he always was supposed to be the "strong one." That was really true, I think, and extremely poignant. Furthermore, I love how you discuss his confusion and pain at not having his sixth sense anymore. I'm off to read the rest of the chapters... and do update sometime?
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Title: i loved it
Reviewed By: Debz [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2004 19:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thoroughly loved your fanfic on touya...its very creative and incentive.. i think u captured touya's mind and personality in this fan fic... really truly inspiring.
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Reviewed By: Kameko-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2003 17:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. This fic is absolutely incredible. The way you've written Touya just amazes me, it's like you actually took up residence in his head for awhile ^_^;;
I can't wait for more. |
Reviewed By: Rinoa Kitty On: June 14, 2003 16:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Incredible story. I am really impressed to see someone focus on Touya throughout these events. I am really enjoying this story, and highly anticipate the next chapter!
Keep up the wonderful work!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Arashi no Miko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2003 15:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O_O
i cannot wait to read more of this. |
