| "When you say nothing at all" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: ~*Senshi's Tenshi (Megami)*~ On: July 07, 2003 18:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your Chapter 4 is the same thing as Chapter 2. So it left me a bit confused. Am glad you updated! Are you on ff.net?? Your chapters dont flow into each other. So I was confused on how it went from one thing to the other. Or is it just Usagi's mood swings?? Well, whichever! Keep writing!! Ja ne!! |
Reviewed By: ~*Senshi's Tenshi (Megami)*~ On: April 02, 2003 16:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The first chap was sad. loved the song part. you have a great fic here! but how did they get together in the first place? nice add-on to let the readers know what happen to Mamo(-baka), but im wondering how long Tro/Usa -chan have been "going out." and like HOW did they even meet let alone decide to go out? it seems odd of him to up and sudden "change" his mind. Am DYING to read more!! seems like you are gonna add a twist, with her and Heero, or atleast Duo being him and either trying to get with her or her with Heero. but that is what it seemed like to me. Ja ne. E-mail me when you update, plez and thank you. Ravens_Midnight@hotmail.com, hope you read and respond soon. |
Reviewed By: Enternal1990 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2003 11:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
90-0=90 |
