| "with you" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: I love Yugi and Davis [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2003 14:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not bad. Maybe you should have explained why Ymai had kissed nazu but it still was an excellant story |
Reviewed By: hot chick On: February 24, 2003 09:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved that story.It was so sad at the beggining but happy at the end!!It had lots of fluffiness!!!!Please oh Please do a seqel |
Reviewed By: AnimeAna [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2003 14:45 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay story, the plot's not too original but is classic. *winks* You should really use a spell check and edit your work, though. Gose is spelled "g o e s", sobb is spelled "s o b" , you forgot to add in periods at the end of your sentences in some places, and you had run-on sentences galore. |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2003 13:28 CST
Comment/Review:
Not bad. A little short, but still pretty good. Yuugi's easy to torment, isn't he? |
