| "Segunda Oportunidad" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: vivian On: January 10, 2004 00:06 CST
Comment/Review:
hurry up and update already!!!!!!!!!!!! i really like your plot and everything!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kaye-Kay On: April 27, 2003 19:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE NOW!!! i dun like waitin' an' tha suspense is killin' me!! |
Reviewed By: Kaye-Kay On: April 18, 2003 20:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i really like it so far, romance, thrill, excitement, sadness. all in one too! itz so sad though!! i feel so bad for kagome an' especially inuyasha. tat last chp. really got me how he spoke o' their relationship to tha bartender. itz sad but i like it!! lol, update soon an' keep up tha Great work. ^- |
Reviewed By: Kaye-Kay On: April 16, 2003 15:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey i'm interested in this story! so i'm encouragin' you to release tha next chp. soon. i've bookmarked your story in my favorites an've been checkin' up on this story like every day but itz neva updated!!! i hope tat inspires u enuff cuz itz tha truth! so could u plz release tha next chp. great work so far. keep up tha great work cuz i'm lookin' forward to tha next chp!! ^-^ |
Reviewed By: Kaye-Kay On: April 13, 2003 11:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this first chp. of yours. I liked how you began the first chp. an' got directly to tha point. I feel so bad for both inuyasha an' kagome!!! -SobZ- lol. i hope you get the second chp. out really soon! i'm countin' on it. o an' to boost ur ego an' inspire u to write more i've bookmarked your story to my favorites so i can go everyday to your story an' see if u've updated yet. LOL. so keep it up!! checkin' up soon!! |
Reviewed By: Cleao On: March 09, 2003 09:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Definite winner! Great first chapter. Can't wait for the next chapter. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: dragonfly On: March 09, 2003 08:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like your story but i'm lust dieing to know what happens.PLEASE finish the story soon cuz i'm not good at waiting. |
Reviewed By: Laura On: March 11, 2003 22:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it´s a great fanfic, please continue writting like this.
I´m from argentina, and Second Chance is translated as
"Segunda Oportunidad" |
