| "Bonds and Nooses" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: bubbley freedom On: January 17, 2004 09:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SAAAD!!! well now that thats over get to the Vegeta/goku Please!
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Reviewed By: arkanianprincess On: November 22, 2003 17:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ohhh that was sad you made me cry and i loved it plz write more your really great ya kno
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Title: Short,Sweet,Sad....
Reviewed By: ReDiCuLoUslY_jEssY On: October 17, 2003 04:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ohhhh how sad that was very sad ... but really good...lol keep up the good fanfics i need too cry once in a while...hehe
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Reviewed By: Saiyajin_Raven69 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2003 16:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This one needs to go way higher than 10 for creativity!! How many yaoi fics do you read that paint ChiChi in a favorable light? ~.^
I think this is an excellent start...my favorite part was the scene where Vegeta found her just after giving birth to Goten. I really like the set up of her close relationship to her youngest, too. It's so very sad that Goku doesn't have much of a bond with Goten, but very understandable, and works well with the fic. I'm VERY anxious to read more!! ^.^ |
