| "The Weekend Home" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Smackies02 On: July 09, 2003 01:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this fic because it made the pilots seem so human and so they were easier to relate to. I hope you continue with this fic I am really enjoying it so far. |
Reviewed By: Teira On: April 11, 2003 15:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is sooo cute. And it's good to know that sometimes parents will do that because of their own pain. It's hard for little kids to not know the difference. They'll spew off whatever their parents tell them. I wish people would refrain from saying bad stuff about their ex or stuff like that. Why make it harder for kids? :::Sighs::: Anyway, keep it up! |
Reviewed By: unicorn144 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2003 21:29 CST
Comment/Review:
ohhhhh, I love it, can't wait till the next part. |
Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2003 17:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
That was harsh! Poor Meiran, she's too young to be used as a weapon. Sometimes divorces can be so nasty.
Can't wait to read how Heero hooked up w/ Duo & WuFei. |
Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2003 13:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Odin seems to be very much smarter then his age.
How could Relena be so tacky as to comment on WuFei's dead clan/family!
Update soon! |
Reviewed By: The Firefaery [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2003 08:21 CST
Comment/Review:
oh yeah...I like it so far. I hope you update quickly. I'm pretty sure that Relena is their mother, and as far as I can tell, she's a bitch. Good job! lol ;)
^The Firefaery^ |
Reviewed By: Airen On: April 05, 2003 01:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a dumb question, but is Odin and Marion's mother Relena? I mean, you never mention her name, and you describe her hair color as brown. Relena's hair is blond, unless I'm mistaken, which I very well could be.
Anyway. I liked the start of this fic. Heero has kids...awwwww. That's so cute. And I like Odin because he's rebellious. I hope you continue. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: unicorn144 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2003 20:12 CST
Comment/Review:
ohhh, Heero hax kids, I can understand that Relena has a hard time, but it is wrong whats she doing to her kids, telling then that about Duo and Wufei. I love it and can't wait till the next part is out. :P |
