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Reviewed By: cece_y [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2011 07:13 EDT
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I wish for you to never stop writing GW fanfiction. You're definitely one of the greatest writers in the fandom. Thanks so much for writing this. I enjoyed this story immensely. :) |
Title: A Masterpiece
Reviewed By: Tyrical [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2006 10:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"From the structure to the plot, to this end, I was concerned always with sharing the idea that music is something outside of our concepts of `right' and `wrong'; that it transcends all boundaries." - You have succeeded. I am honored to have had the chance to be able to read such work. To see such dedication to a task. To see the overall commitment to a single thing and see it take shape. Such a shape it was. I was moved and awed and totally taken with all every aspect. Every character a joy. The theme inspiring. In fact words fail to describe just how much this piece moved me. So I'll just say thank you for sharing it with the world thereby giving me a chance to read it.
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Reviewed By: Arsenic On: May 23, 2005 23:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was such a lovely fic. It had heart, which many stories seem to be lacking these days. I especially liked your more poetic turns of phrase that I generally saw at the beginnings and endings of the later chapters. As you pointed out, after awhile it seems as though everything has been done; there are no new areas to explore. I was feeling this way about Gundam Wing fanfiction when I came across your story and you proved me wrong. A truly wonderful work. Thank you for gifting us with it.
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Reviewed By: holly (daabkrah@hotmail.com) On: March 18, 2005 22:00 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you are so wonderful. this story was just what i needed from beginning to end. you did such an amazing job on this. you even inspired me to pick up an instrument, and im enjoying every minute of it. thank you thank you for taking the time to finish this, as i know you were struggling to do so towards the end. i cant tell you enough how much i appreciate it. wonderful! thank you so much. this will always have a special place with me. -holly
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Reviewed By: ShadowFated On: February 06, 2005 17:03 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can honestly say that I have never read a GW fic that captured my attention as much as VIVA did. Throughout the whole story I pretty much sat staring at my moniter, enchanted with both the writing style and the beauty of the music described. The spelling and grammar was nearly flawless as far as I could tell; only several spelling mistakes come to mind and I believe there is no other GW fic which studies music as indepthly. Sure, there are stories in which Duo goes to some choir camp, meets Heero and they fall in love, but those weren't about the music. Not like VIVA was. I know some people probably wanted a romantic and sappy ending, but that wouldn't have fit with the story. In my opinion, the ending was beautifully orchestrated, (no pun intended,) with all the loose ties coming together. I thank the author for an amazing read and for sticking with it when others have stopped writing. ^__^
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Reviewed By: Sivy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2005 00:42 EST
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I really did like this fic a lot. I love how you gave the music a life. But, the ending just seemed rushed... you didn't really explain why some things happend or had very good character communication or some such things... I am aware that is was about the music, but you started out really strong with good character actions and it kinda died on the climax of the story, it was a great build up, then it kinda died. I love the music don't get me wrong, I think it should have been continued the way you began it. Just seemed you wanted to get it over with right away so you didn't bother with anything else. I did feel the busic also, you left enough place for our own imagenary sence to guess what wen't on throughout the performance... *sighs* but overall, I would reccomend the fic to my friends and hope you continue the great work. Good luck and have fun!!!
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Reviewed By: (^_^) SS. On: January 29, 2005 01:17 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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You. So. Rock!!! Gorgeous imagery throughout the last chapter; vivid scenes and slashes of wild color. The last paragraph was wonderful - I really enjoyed this fic.
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Reviewed By: Maison On: January 27, 2005 20:59 EST
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Oh my GOD, this is quite possibly the best fanfiction I have ever read. I'm going to go tell all my performing arts friends to read this. This is just amazing. I liked the ending a lot, even if we were left wondering about relationships. It felt very appropriate, since that's what my friends and I do after major performances. We just hang out and destroy these pieces that we put all this time into (btw, I'm a vocal performance gal myself). We once turned our Solo and Ensemble contest piece into a heavy metal song. I love your dialouge. Especially the scene with Trowa talking about no-hands knocking and one-hand clapping to go with four minutes and thirty-three seconds of silence (my band friends are always trying to get the teacher to let them play that piece ^___^) . And Dorothy. The way you write Dorothy is just....brilliant. I heart VIVA, and I am saving it to my bookmarks.
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Reviewed By: CYOA AthrunxYou Luver (not signed in) On: January 27, 2005 20:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love you. Well your fic anyway. I wish I could hear the music you described so wondefuly for real instead of in my mind. It would be wonderful. I play the violin and I beleive that music and art of any kind is outside the boundries of right and wrong. Its been a long time since I've read a story that the main plot isn't about bunny's and what goes on during the spring. I wish I could have seen something like that for real, it would have been awsome. *sighs* Well I'll just have to content myself with imagining it I guess. This actually makes me want to try and compose a song again for the violin, I've not done that in a while cause I think my music sucks. Keep up the great work!
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Title: Worship of a Music Ignorant Mew
Reviewed By: Dark_Mew [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2005 19:31 EST
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O_O Oh my peeps!!! holy shit holy shit! This fic is the best thing I have read in my entire year of reading fanfiction. It was so intense! The ending was awesome. Like I was there and could feel their passion and love for the music. It didn't even bug me that this fic wasn't very romantic cause in a way it was the most most wonderfully sexy thing I have ever ever read. It made me cry for peeps sake! It wasn't even sad!! I think I was just upset that it ended. I didn't even understand half of the musical stuff in this fic and I still felt this way about it. *sniffs* You are a genius! It is an honor to have been able to read such an awesome fic. ^_^
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Reviewed By: sean's grrl On: January 27, 2005 11:38 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*whimpers* oh my God, this fic was so goddamn intense... music is a controlling force in my life, though not many know it... I was sucked in to this story from the first paragraph... Not all stories need romance, this one, in my opinion has just enough hints of it to keep those people satisfied, but keeps you so wrapped up in the plot and the flow that you don't notice the lack of romance-at least I didn't. *shudders* your descriptions were fantastic, and I am both happy and sad to see this fic finished-happy because now I don't have to wait for updates, but sad because there's not more to it... is there perhaps a sequel or something possible? Anyway, I loved Viva!... keep up the good work crazykatgrrl
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Title: Correction
Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2005 18:58 EST
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Meant that *I'm* the cretin, as a non-performer! Hope there was no confusion!
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Title: New reader
Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2005 16:00 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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Amazing setting! You really know your stuff. Very vivid, great characters and interactions. Love the Duo eating for money bit, too! My only complaint, as a non-performing arts cretin, is that I'm aching for more attention on the developing relationships and snoogling.
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Reviewed By: (^_^) SS. On: January 26, 2005 10:03 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Squuuuueeeeeeeeeeee!I'm so glad to get more Viva! I had it for breakfast and now I'm full of bouncy happy goodness. I'll be waiting eagerly for the next part, no matter how long it takes.
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Reviewed By: holly (daabkrah@hotmail.com) On: January 14, 2005 16:58 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
alright,im begging again.i cant help it, this story is too amazing for me to sit here quietly while you dont update. ;D maybe if you see that there really are people (like me)who desperately want to read more of this story, you'll eventually continue. maybe? i sure hope so. truthfully, this is still the best peice of fanfiction i have come across. i love it more and more with every chapter. otherwise, id stop bugging you so much. i really do love reading this story though, and i wish you will continue someday. beautiful job. watchout though! this doesnt mean im giving up! you'll get more reviews from me with similar messages in the future! (sounds threatening, huh? well good!:) anyway, ive resorted to begging. please please. you have an amazing knowledge of music which just stand to enhance everything about this fic. i learn something new everytime i read it, and after every chapter you make me want to be able to play the violin or the cello or something. you make me enjoy classical music after everychapter! you fiend! actually, i always enjoy it. but now doubly so! i could name so many things that i love about this story:your characterizations and the flow of the whole peice are especially amazing. basically everything about this story i enjoy. so im sitting here, begging! throw me the penny! (preferably a chapter and not a penny, as that would be more useful to me..) Begging! can you tell im desperate yet?Im also running out of room to write. bye then, and please! holly
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Reviewed By: Escagirl On: December 03, 2004 07:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, my Gods! I love this! You *have* to write more, damnit! Noowwwww!!! And, ooh, is Wufei and Treize getting it on? And, ooh, I hope Dermail get's his ass kicked something good! And, hey, think you can work Haggis in there as one of those try-this-and-get-jar-of-money foods? Or maybe stuffed sheep testicles? Haggis - yum! Testicles - I dunno. I should go try some, it's apparently pretty good. Anyways, hurry and write more! This fic is so cool and action packed. My fav bit has to be one of the times Quatre ate the gross food.
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Reviewed By: Yue Kisaragi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2004 00:51 EST
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*melts* I can't get enough of this story. I'm completely addicted. You should be ashamed for making us wait that long (though.. I'm sure you had reason for it). I CANNOT wait for the next chapter. This music... that the EO plays... you wouldn't have a copy?... a recording?... something I can listen to?... If it didn't exist, could you write some? ^^ I'd LOVE to hear it.
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Reviewed By: kittyme On: November 18, 2004 12:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Write more please is all I have to say. I love your fic. It is absolutely sensational. If you ever decide to become a proffesional writer and you make this your first novel may I have the first copy? Please go on with this. It is absolutely incredible!
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Title: ch 15
Reviewed By: justkat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2004 08:25 EST
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Yayy!!! You wrote more!!! Thanks heaps. Your passion for your subject matter really shines through. I'm so glad that you haven't abandoned this, because it is a great read. ^^
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Reviewed By: Jinx Saru On: November 09, 2004 00:36 EST
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O_O HOLY FANFICS BATMAN!!!! This is some good shizzit. Problem is...I don't understand most of it ^_^;;;(is completey music ignorant) That doesn't mean I don't love it though. This fic is the most kickbutt thing I've read this month. Are Duo and Heero a couple yet? They seem really close...
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Reviewed By: holly (daabkrah@hotmail.com) On: November 08, 2004 18:56 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
do you ever wonder why i love you? well wonder no more, because this chapter is your answer. you have just made my day, my week even. what a beautiful chapter. this story is just... inspiring. the character development, the detail, creativity, plot, everything. you completely amaze me sometimes. this story has outdont itself. you have gone beyond even the highest praise i can possibly give you for this. wow. you really made me so happy updating. im being completely sincere writing this review, also. wonderful job. im still in awe. thank you so much. you really cant know how much i appreciate this. wow. -holly
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Reviewed By: holly (daabkrah@hotmail.com) On: November 07, 2004 16:51 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i was just scrolling through this review page, and im starting to feel like a stalker. i have... multiple reviews. in a row. okay, i just reviewed a few minutes ago. just my comments here. you can ignore it. wonderful job. -holly
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Title: (formerly ardicana@msn.com)
Reviewed By: holly (daabkrah@hotmail.com) On: November 07, 2004 16:47 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
gahh! where are you? im having withdrawl issues concerning this story.if you're planning not to finish it, could you tell me? i check to see if you've updated at least once a week, im starting to lose hope though! it's a wonderful story. you should be proud. (insert more flattery, with very obvious ulterior motives...) i need updates desperatly. i dont mean to nag... but i cant help it! im nagging! gahh! alright. im done. but im not done checking for updates weekly! it's slightly pathetic, huh? anyway, i want you to know as you have probably already guessed, i adore this story. you have an amazing talent. i need more of it! thanks. -holly
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Reviewed By: Sivy On: November 04, 2004 16:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Forgot to rate it ^_^
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Title: PLEASE
Reviewed By: Sivy On: November 04, 2004 16:15 EST
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Please write the next part asap. This is such a great story and I really don't want to see it scratched and thrown out... please finish it
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Reviewed By: Your Desperate Fan On: November 01, 2004 00:06 EST
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Author, this fic is not completed. You... you have to finish it. I, as a desperate fan of this fic, order you to finish it. Okay, I don't order you to finish it; I beg you to! I love this fic. I want to know if Dermail gets his hands on Duo and why he wants Duo so badly. I want to see Duo and Heero seriously together. I want to see Quatre and Trowa finally admit their love to eachother. I want to see the final product of the EO's work. I want a finished fic. Please!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: holly (ardicana@msn.com) On: August 20, 2004 20:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wait, wait, wait! what happened here? why does the status of this story state it as 'completed'? what are you doing to me! it ended? i've been waiting for the next chapter for all of forever (well that may be a teeeensy bit exagerated) and its just... over? i know that's not the end. too many plot strings left unknotted. not to mention the fact that the hadn't gotten to the EO's end of the year performance. and heero and duo arent even close to becoming friends. what happened? you're not just... abandoning it are you? i hope not. i absolutly adore this story. it is one of my alltime favorites. please email me with reassurances of the continuation of this wonderful fic. or better yet, an update! heh. okay, i admit it. that was begging. desperate begging. i love this story and would absolutly hate to see it discontinued. (im begging, here!) okay. enough of me. let me just say you have been doing a wonderful job, if you couldn't alredy tell that by my previous reviews. i hopefully await your next installment, impatiently. thank you for this wonderufl story. you exceed my expectations. -holly
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Reviewed By: holly (ardicana@msn.com) On: July 27, 2004 15:33 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
where are you? i absolutly love this story. i dont mean to sound impatient. im just curious. are you going to continue this? i hope so. wonderful job so far. it's so much fun to read! great characters, i love their little quirks. thanks, -holly
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Reviewed By: holly (ardicana@msn.com) On: May 13, 2004 16:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i admit it. this is my alltime favorite peice of fanfiction on the web. i... cant explain it very well, my reasons for loveing it so much. but just trust me when i say that i have read a LOT of stories, and this tops them all. i dont say that lightly, either. the depth you put into this story. everything about it is just phenominal. great job. please continue soon. -holly
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Reviewed By: Rhiaonna_Moon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2004 18:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your fic and can't wait for more, i was woundering if you could help me with something. Every time i try to go read one of your other storys using your author name it tells me not found, if you can help i'd be most greatful, thanx!!
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