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Title: hey
Reviewed By: Princess Kagome/Kikyo hater On: July 24, 2004 20:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ummmmm, well, I don't like to be rude or anything, but it's kinda wierd that Kouga is Kagome's grandfather. I mean, really wierd story. not like I haven't wrote wierd fan fics before, but they were like those funny/crazy kind of stories.Yours just went off the scale of wierdness. I mean, what's Inuyasha without jealous guys fighting over Kagome? Whatev! It just wasn't very good.
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Reviewed By: lysel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2003 13:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It great write more please |
Reviewed By: luna_night [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2003 23:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
woooo hooo i figured it out ok im done now .. have a good day |
Reviewed By: Van Stolin On: July 05, 2003 00:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
I know it is Shippo, or else you wouldn't keep bringing him up, but I really like that and Kagome would look cute as a kitsune. |
Reviewed By: MommyRogers [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2003 18:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
Pretty cool fic - I'm betting Shippo |
Reviewed By: neoqueen [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2003 15:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think it is KOUGA-KUN, he call InuYasha Inu-Kurro, or Inu-baka, 'cause Naraku is evil, and they are supose to destroy him, besides totosai, is kind of funny alheimer sick grandpa, and Myoga, it's like too little to be her grandparent, just think about it, by the way great plot keep it that way ( the good job )....
can't wait for the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: bettychan On: July 03, 2003 15:06 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon. My guess is that it's Kouga. |
Reviewed By: nekobaka [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2003 12:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
lets see
she dident say hate she said dont get along
couldent be naroku - cant imagine him being nice frently grandpa
kouga- hum, could be - he might have cooled toward inuyasha in the 500 years to call him baka insted of dog-turd or whatever he usualy does - besides after 500 years i realy dought he now wants his granddaughter as his mate
shippo also makes sence - they dont get alond - and he often calls inuyasha baka
huh - cant wait to find out
ohohoh - the hint that inuyasha gets along with hardly anyone - and when Kagome listed the list she left one -toto somting? and her mom said mabe mabe not to the list. ummmmm now im thinking it might be him!
oh i dont know!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: raya On: June 12, 2003 12:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think its kouga though if its shippo that would be hilarious and please dont let it be naraku |
Reviewed By: inususu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2003 13:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
me thinks its shippo |
Reviewed By: Kurai On: June 03, 2003 21:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
I mean in last review, Naraku WON"T be nice and fatherly to Haru and stuff, Kouga MIGHT be a choice .. but freaky ... *he likes kagome!* |
Reviewed By: Kurai On: June 03, 2003 21:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmmmmmm....lemme take a wild guess here .... i take .... Miroku!!! *muahahaha* ... i duno ... but they sorta but not really get along...and Inu's not happy about it so ... Naraku might be choice though I'd think he'd be a nice and fatherly to Haru and stuff ... i duno... @____@ update SOOOOOOOON! PLEASE!!! |
Reviewed By: Kalia_Son [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2003 19:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like this. And i think that the ancestor is...possibly...in my twisted weird mind...Naraku? Maybe? heh, just update soon please! |
Reviewed By: Paws [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2003 17:51 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
*grins* Ok, that helps with the romantic aspects of them still being able to 'pair up'. But judging by the reaction of her 'grandfather' my guess would be Kouga. |
Reviewed By: luna_night [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2003 17:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmmm im guessing kouga..it cant be naraku because well thats just sick and they are going to eventually kill him so duh...ok im done now..o also love the story its really cute.. |
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