| "Son of the Mob" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Title: WTF?
Reviewed By: Nikechick7777 On: December 07, 2004 20:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Comment/Review:
What the hell? This is exactly like son of the mob (the book) except you changed their names? I love that book but if you're gonna write fanfic make sure you're not pleajurizing!
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Reviewed By: swtxlilazn On: September 09, 2003 22:32 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay. i didnt read ur fanfix but hear me out.
its funny but i'm in the middle of reading a story called Son of the mob by gordon korman but to tell u the truth the title was the only reason why i tried to read ur story. sorri. i'm sure its good but, i didnt continue reading it because i dont like inuyasha pairings. but i'm sure the stori is great. but my advice i dont kno if ur copied word for word b careful because teh website might be rid of cuz it happened to my sis. she gave full credit to the author but somehow they got rid of her story because someone reported her even though she gave the author full credit. i'm just tellin u to b cautious thats all. ja ne. bye |
Reviewed By: Storm_410 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2003 12:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
HA! Oh that was priceless. I read it late but the chapter was great and I hope the next one isn't out at a much later date.... oh that was sad... but it got my point across... I hope.... |
Reviewed By: Bsasami On: August 16, 2003 21:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
I haven't read your fic yet but I will, what's up with the chapters just wondering. Will read your fic. Will comment on later. |
Reviewed By: kokonutsu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2003 23:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
I couldn't help but notice that there was no chapter 3, i wonder why... Anyway the usual spelling errors were apparent although it was nice to see that Inu Yasha wasn't the leading quarterback and everything but why the hell did you give Kagome an american last name?! Or whatever last name it is. |
Reviewed By: kokonutsu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2003 23:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, i did like the first person narrative, all the uncles were quite confusing. The intro was long, but the conflict where Inu tries to be clean was nice, specially the whole car ordeal. Nice work but check your spelling i found quite a few mistakes. |
Reviewed By: kokonutsu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2003 23:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey this isn't chapter two! This is chapter one! |
Reviewed By: kili087 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2003 21:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!!!!
it is one of the best mob stories i have read.
please update soon!!! |
Reviewed By: Storm_410 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2003 00:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
Interesting beginning.
I've never read one of the "mob" stories, but this one has begun well enough. Keep writing. ^-^
- Storm |
