| "Life and Death" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: ShadowFax402 On: June 10, 2004 15:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is story is really good, please update!
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Title: mistress
Reviewed By: ai On: March 06, 2004 23:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think saturn/firefly for hotaru and cosmos/tsuki/yue/eclipse for serena. tsuki in japanese for moon and yue is chinese for moon.
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Reviewed By: zimmergage@yahoo.com On: November 07, 2003 10:40 CST
Comment/Review:
Ha i really like your story. But is the other sailor scouts going to show up or are they dead? I hope not. Are they about the same age as Hortoru or they don t even exist? Sorry about the questions
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Reviewed By: Tenshi_Koneko On: July 20, 2003 15:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't think of any codenames for the two cause im not good at it. As for the couple I suggest putting Usagi with Remy. They would make such a cute couple. Hey maybe you can even put Hotaru with Logan!!! Anyway, great story and I can't wait to read more. |
Reviewed By: James Hall On: June 20, 2003 14:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
Nice fic personally I would suggest Reamy lebeau/serena I like the idea of hotaru/logan as for codenames anything with moon in it would be good for serena just don't make her sound to much like a flower child lol and for Hotaru hows "Angelius ex morta" it's latin for "Angel of Death" |
Reviewed By: cosmos On: June 18, 2003 16:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok its really good one thing though I was thinking ying-yang light and dark cauze their suppose to be polar opposites yeah but they have simmilar powers so yea if you don't like it then just ignore me ok bye!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Oruncrest On: June 16, 2003 22:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
You never said which continuity you're using. Is it Comic continuity? 90's cartoon continuity? Evolution? Ultimate X-men brrr? For the moment, I'll assume Evolution and suggest... Sunspot. Roberto always was a bit of a womanizer, and needs the love of a good girl to tie him down. Serena easily fills the bill there.
As for codenames, howzabout 'Moonlight' for Serena, and 'Umbra' for Hotaru? |
Reviewed By: kaoru On: June 15, 2003 08:22 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I like very much this fic
it's interesting and great.
it's very strange to see hotaru old and usagi as his daughter.
hmmm like scott. like lebeau too.
it's hard to vote >_<
so I don't want and let other or you choose the best for usagi ^^
please udapte soon |
