| "A Taste Of Power" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: PlayingWithDemons On: June 21, 2006 14:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story was very interesting, but I felt it could have been more indepth. The idea was fantastic but the chapters felt like they could have been longer. Not to fill up space but to add more depth to the story, bring it to the level of an epic. The original charater was fabulous! You really created a bold and interesting character. She died so quickly though, it felt almost like a rushed ending but you've given us the sequel!!! Overall I really loved this story, you are very talented and imaginative!! Great work!!
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Reviewed By: dudekiller(nsi) On: December 20, 2005 00:29 CST
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this is a really cool fic. i have to say the ending was unexpected but fitted in very nicely. i really enjoyed this. awesome job.
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Reviewed By: cursed_jax [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2003 18:28 CST
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okay, that was a good story, and i REALLY have to say that the ending cliffhanger was really good (i know that because i don't really like where the story ended). hopefully you will be able to write the next part soon, because the way that this ends is not very good for MY mental health
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Reviewed By: mo On: October 01, 2003 19:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
don't stop writing! i luv this fic.
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Reviewed By: J.C. On: October 01, 2003 17:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it.Can't wait to see the sequal!!!!
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Title: Here ya go!!
Reviewed By: Yanou [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2003 00:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SORRY!!?! I always forget to review...forgive me?? Well, PLEASE release the next chapter...I cant wait to read it. Thanx again, and I'll catch ya later. ~Always
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Reviewed By: Katzztar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2003 17:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've enjoyed this story alot. I hope that Kohaku did go back to Kagome. I know what you mean about the reviews. For some odd reason that happens here at MM.O. My story Dangerous Assumptions has over 4oo visits but no reviews, NOT ONE!
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Reviewed By: Llorona [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2003 15:55 CDT
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I've also really enjoyed this story! |
Reviewed By: Pruningshears On: July 18, 2003 23:35 CDT
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wow this was really good, i was very surprised, the plot fits perfectly! I cant wait to see what happens next please hurry!! and if you havent already yo ucould try posting this on fanfiction.net too, I'm sure you would get tons of review there as well. great job but please hurry!! |
Reviewed By: Koneko_queen [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2003 16:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! I love this story! Just watch your spelling and grammar a little more closely. And I believe u mean to use the word 'yokai' instead of 'yokia'. At any rate, I love this story, so continue soon!!!!!!
~~Koneko-chan~~ |
Reviewed By: Inu-kun185 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2003 20:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hope you update soon! I really enjoy your fic! |
Reviewed By: nobody On: July 27, 2003 12:11 CDT
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i love this stiory |
