| "Anguish" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Sio-chan On: June 12, 2004 02:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this so far, but can u tunr this into a Aya/Omi pairing? There are so few of those, and it's my fav pairing in the world, and you haven't made any deffinet pairing decisions yet right? Love this so much, it's so good, love the angst. ^^
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Reviewed By: Cory On: July 24, 2003 22:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
ok.. apparently my problem ^^ i liked your story too |
Reviewed By: Cory On: July 24, 2003 18:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh my goodness i would love to read this story if it ws formated correctly! in case you havent noticed, the first few words of each line are cut off... perhaps its just me, but i think there's something wrong in your document write-up. Fix it soon so i can read it, yes? |
