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| "Nimble Wish" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: clavira On: October 26, 2004 16:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it, why don´t you update? Sounds, as if it could be interesting!
| Reviewed By: AJ-chan On: July 15, 2004 08:54 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hi! Your fic is one of the most interesting in all the 1000+ Ranma 1/2 fics in Mediaminer. It's true! =) I liked the way you wrote the introductory paragraphs, describing Akane as a he. I also like the way she and Shinosuke interact. I really do wonder what the Duke's background is. It's really intriguing that he's Prince Shinji's uncle, and I'm really curious about the Duke's small comment about Akane 'looking like her.' I hope that you continue this fic soon. It really is good. And your grammar isn't atrocious! There are some errors, yes, but they're not too bad that they're eyesores or hinder the reader from reading. If you want, I can beta-read your fics, but if you'd rather not then that's okay this is just a friendly offer. I really think that you have great potential as a writer. Keep up the good work. Ganbatte! =) (If you do decide to contact me, my e-mail address is aj1276@gundamwing.net)
| Reviewed By: MadameChristine On: October 08, 2003 04:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story, please keep writing.
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