| "Show Me How" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
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Reviewed By: Foxy Grampa On: June 09, 2005 23:49 CDT
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Okay, I so love Rae and Eclipse together and all... but Raenef was pretty much out of charactar 0_o What, so he's confused about his feelings on minute, then he's giggling and kissing Eclipse the next moment.. I don't understand *that* much =_= It's just not realistic. And Rae is innocent enough to really be intune with his feelings, he wouldn't even be confused just ebcause he didn't get a breif about love. He was in a guild with a bunch of dudes, I'm sure he picked up on something 0_o It would more rather be Eclipse that would be confused. And.... nani..... what- IN JAPANESE. They're nto japanese! The series isn't even japanese! Both of the writers weren't Japanese! Kara could be, but I doubt it when both of them aren't. I want to say Korean, but it's hard to tell for me. o_o; Yeah... just NEVER do that again. Think about the children! I'll just say, I think you misthought Raenef's innocence and put it in incorrect context. o_o He's not competely naive, and he's far more innocent and would be blushing out his cute little brains if Eclipse ever kissed him x3 A good fanfic other then that, The first paragraph is a bit to poetic-y for me but it gets better. I liked it I suppose n_n;
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Reviewed By: Darksparrow2 On: April 27, 2005 19:30 CDT
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It's reall cute and I really like it. It isn't every day that i see people who don't write lemons. Cool
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Reviewed By: Aliera On: April 11, 2005 19:31 CDT
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Just a thought. Isn't this a Korean manga? So what's with the "Nani?" thing. I always thought that were Japanese...
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Reviewed By: Sesshy81 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2005 16:37 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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EVIL EVIL EVIL!!!!!! Erutis is a peeper!!!!! LOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOL!!! ROFLROFLROFL!!! HOW COULD YOU????? It would have ended on such a sweet note!!! SOMEBODY DO A CROSSOVER AND PAIR HER WITH MIROKU!!!!! HEHHEHHEHHEH.......
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Reviewed By: Rikku5 On: June 18, 2004 19:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved that fanfic. You probably wrote it awile ago. I loved the style of your writing it just got me sucked into it. Your spellingf was wonderful too. the only thing I didn't like about it was the personality you put for Raenef. I don't know exactly but you seemed to give him more brains and he didn't seemed to be as innocent. I must say that your writing style is very good
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Reviewed By: ice-lolli333 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 16:01 CDT
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awww...that was cute.... :)
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Reviewed By: MatsuyaHime [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2004 19:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love Demon Diary, that was a short but sweet fic. I don't are if it was written almost a year ago, i still like it. ^.^
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Reviewed By: Mononoke [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2004 15:54 CST
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Hey, not bad. I like this, and am incredibly sad that there are only seven of them coming out. Boo. Anywayz, nice job, and it is sad you don't write lemons...
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Reviewed By: Yume-chan On: February 29, 2004 07:18 CST
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Heyo =giggles= I loved that ficcie...especially the part where E...E....hte girl (dun know her name) was watching them...te he he...lucky thing...I would have loved to have been able to watch that LOL. Keep up the good work. Ja
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Reviewed By: Aki-sama On: February 09, 2004 17:38 CST
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kawai! it was really good and cute until the end. i don't like that eru-chan was spying on them. --
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Reviewed By: tsunami-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2004 16:25 CST
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*starry eyed* im so...happy!! this is the first demon diary fic ive read, ive been going crazy looking for some. i didnt even know they had demon diary fanfiction on ff.net! and i was just on it yesterday! -_-; well anyway good story. continue writing ^^
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Reviewed By: katsa5 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2004 21:39 CST
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^_^ Nice and in character. I'm impressed with your writing style, it's addictive. I get a feel of the environment. I hope you are writing more Demon Diary fics, 'cause I like 'em. Pardon me a moment as I look at your other works. (smile) And the ending was funny.
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