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Reviewed By: Kitty Elf On: May 11, 2005 19:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Hey, I just found your story. It was kind of rushed, especially right at the beginning, but I like it. Your version of the characters is really funny, I couldn't help but laugh when they kept running into eachother in the woods and knocking eachother out. And of course the three little ones are traumatized by the whole thing, poor kids. Tea and Mei are being totally left out - I wonder how they feel about the whole thing? It's good that you varied different characters' approach to their situations in being dominant: one is really possessive, one is nice, one is ignoring his feelings - again the three younger ones are just freaked out. Jou gave in quickly, didn't he? I guess Seto is just irresistable. The really stupid annoying slave traders who seem to pop up everywhere are kind of funny too. Overall, I enjoyed reading your story, and hope you'll find the time and energy to continue sometime soon!
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Reviewed By: Kitty Elf On: May 11, 2005 19:28 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hey, I just found your story. It was kind of rushed, especially right at the beginning, but I like it. Your version of the characters is really funny, I couldn't help but laugh when they kept running into eachother in the woods and knocking eachother out. And of course the three little ones are traumatized by the whole thing, poor kids. Tea and Mei are being totally left out - I wonder how they feel about the whole thing? It's good that you varied different characters' approach to their situations in being dominant: one is really possessive, one is nice, one is ignoring his feelings - again the three younger ones are just freaked out. Jou gave in quickly, didn't he? I guess Seto is just irresistable. The really stupid annoying slave traders who seem to pop up everywhere are kind of funny too. Overall, I enjoyed reading your story, and hope you'll find the time and energy to continue sometime soon!
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Reviewed By: Sable Sapphire On: August 08, 2004 08:04 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome!!!!! PLEASE, update soon. I love it.
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Title: alittleagressive
Reviewed By: abitbaffled On: May 24, 2004 00:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
It was nice, but I kinda got uncomfortable with Malike and Marik's uhh... *thing* there. Be a little easy when it comes to Malik and Marik, K? My brother's are already umm... barfing. Cool fic though!
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Reviewed By: DirtyGirl On: March 02, 2004 19:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HiI liked your story. Hope ya update soon!
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Title: 7
Reviewed By: TabiWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2004 14:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this, but your grammer was off. Actually, it's way off in a lot of your chapters, but I still like the story! TabiWolf
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Reviewed By: Lakota (reg) On: January 16, 2004 19:45 CST
Comment/Review:
please keep writin it is way awesome man. *i can't believe my friend got me hooked on this* sSome of the stuff u guys come up with is amazin keep writin k
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Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2004 15:48 CST
Comment/Review:
ummm..it said it was an update.. yet, AINT NO UPDATE! i already read "ch.9" IM CONFUZED X.x
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Reviewed By: Bakuraluva [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2004 00:15 CST
Comment/Review:
Okay, just reviewin' here again! Good story. As you must know already! I love your writings!! ^___^
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Reviewed By: Technical Dragon On: January 13, 2004 21:02 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gettin' Better and Better. Pleaze update!!!!!!!!!
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Title: lol
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2004 18:14 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay, joo updated... the very next day ^^, heh good lemon, very good ^^
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Reviewed By: Bakuraluva [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2004 21:29 CST
Comment/Review:
I read this chappie on ff.net, no? Well, good chappie and write more, puh-leez! ^__^
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Reviewed By: TabiWolf(not logged in) On: January 12, 2004 18:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really wanna see some more JouxSeto action! TabiWolf
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Title: O.O!
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2004 17:58 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
JOO FINALLY UPDATED! YAY! BUT PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE! dun give up ;_; write the lemons, and update soooon , this story starting to get gewd, dun stop now!!!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! want sum inspiration? read sum of Bishojo_shadow's stories! or try tanyamaxwell (think i spelled that wrong) neways, i want u to update this story reeeeeeea; soon, iight ty ^^
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Reviewed By: alostblackcat [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2004 20:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oohhhhhhh this is cool, pleas update soon WITH A LEMON!!
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