| "Love at First Sight" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Amnesiac23 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2007 20:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just couldn't enjoy this mainly because of the fact that the sentence structure is terrible. Would have been a great story otherwise.
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Reviewed By: SaturnPrincess On: April 06, 2005 18:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!!!!!! YOU CAN'T BE STOPPING DO YOU EVEN REALIZE HOW GOOD YOUR STORY IS YOU ARE DEMENTED IF YOU STOP NOW ESPECIALLY SO FAR INTO THE STORY PLEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!! FINISH PLEASE??????
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Title: beta reader
Reviewed By: beta reader On: December 08, 2004 18:01 CST
Comment/Review:
good story, but do u need a beta reader? I could BETA all of yuor stories for you!
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Reviewed By: Waterlight On: May 30, 2004 04:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey you ever ganna update just curious is all
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Reviewed By: Waterlight On: May 30, 2004 04:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey you ever ganna update just curious is all
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Reviewed By: SAVAGE RAY MM.org user not signed in On: January 21, 2004 15:14 CST
Comment/Review:
This is great story, please post the rest up, oh do you think you could stop posting the ages and make the chapters longer. I think that would help alot. Oh well anyway I'll still read it even if the chapters aren't longer just put the rest up ok.
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Reviewed By: sailor chibi light On: January 04, 2004 15:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story i love it. Please put the reat of the story up!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: pyro12 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2003 20:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your spelling and grammar is horendous. It would also be nice if you could spice it up with some adjectives and more complex sentence structure. It seems like a good idea though, so if you could fix it up I am sure it would be great.
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