| "A Wish By Two Hearts" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: HURRY UP!!
Reviewed By: persons24 On: May 20, 2004 21:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE!!HURRY UP AND WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER!!!!I'm dyin over here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: fireash [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2004 01:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
boy people here suck huh. i think more people should have reviewed. it was a promising story. i hope you pick it up someday.
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Reviewed By: (fireash) [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2003 23:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i really like this story so far. interesting. i like the cliff hanger. but this part of chapter 4...does it start at the begining or is it a segment somewhere in the chapter? because it doesn't say what become of her grampa. i hope to read more soon.
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Title: chapter one
Reviewed By: inuyasha666 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2003 18:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's so great!!! I really liked the part (so far) where Inuyasha turns into a demon!!!!! Sorry but I'm a huge fan when hes full demon! I don't know why...maybe cause he looks really cool and all. I think you see him turn into a full demon a least 3 times in the english tv shows. (Back to the story.) I can't wait tell I read the next chapter! Oh and also in my fanfic, I have really short chapters to so you shouldn't have to worry! I wish I was as good as a writer as you!>_< If you want to read my fanfic its called Kami. Now I have to get back to reading.^^
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Reviewed By: Kate ^_^ On: November 11, 2003 22:22 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAH! ANOTHER CHAPTER!!! XD yea! arigato! arigato! know its been of for like a week, but i've been lazy, so i haven't reviewed until now! i'm REALLY sorry! i really need to work on that laziness issue of mine... ^ ^; i don't mind that Kouga-kun isn't in there... but i WOULD like another chapter soon! (and a little longer perhaps?) *sigh* i'm sorry, i'm way to demanding... ^ ^; gomen gomen... but you're doing great, and i really like your fic so far! ^_^ anyway, i'll be wait for another chapter, so update soon! ^-^ ja ne! ~Kate
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Reviewed By: Kate ^_^ On: October 15, 2003 11:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME! great fic!!!!! ^_^ i must ask you a favor or 2 though... okay 3... OKAY 4! you can COMPLETELY ignore me if you wish, but i always give my unwanted opinon *smirk* first, UPDATE SOOOOOOON! second, ^ ^; umm... can you lengthen the chapters a bit? third, can you slip my DEAR KOUGA-KUN in there somewhere? ^ ^; just for a few seconds (at least) please? and lastly, um... can you kinda try to make sure that Kagome and Inuyasha keep their innocensce? ^ ^; like, you know, blushing when they hold hands, rarely ever hugging and stuff, and being embarassed at EVEY LITTLE STINKING THING! (i never said i didn't want them to kiss... i just want it to take an eternity for them to do it... *smirk*) but i'm glad that you mensioned that it's gonna be long! ^_^ which means it will take inuyasha an eternity to be nice, right? heh heh... i'm crazy lol. anyway, i LOVE your fic, and i would be thoroughly delighted if you were to write me more! ^_^ i shall be viewing your progress daily! Ja kata! ~Kate
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