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| "Run Away" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] | Reviewed By: Kens_doll On: April 08, 2004 06:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update sooooooooooooooooooooon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: silverdemon87 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2004 22:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
YO! ^^ It's me again. Wowies... You've really done a great job rewriting it. I must say that you really have improved. Of course, not that I expect anything less from you... lol... N E ways... I just wanted to say that it was good but ONE MORE THING (Geez, I'm starting to sound like Uncle from the Jackie Chan Adventures... lol) If you want this fic to have some sort of... how do you say...? like SERIOUSNESS to it then instead of saying like Kaoru: 'blah blah blah' or Kenshin: 'yadda yadda that i do' well... you get my point. Anyways, I think it would be better if you just went: Kenshin said," blah blah blah." Sano asked," yadda yadda?" Kaoru yelled," BAKA!!!" or something or another... ^^ I think that would really help a lot. NOW HOLD UP. I DONT WANT TO CAUSE YOU ANY MORE TROUBLE THAN I ALREADY HAVE. YOU DON'T HAVE TO CHANGE IT JUST BECAUSE I SUGGESTED IT. KEY WORD: SUGGESTED. OKAY? YOU COULD DO IT BUT YOU DONT HAVE TO. GOT IT? GOOD... Moving on... um... I think that's it. ^^;; Well, be sure to update, I'll be looking forward to it! Oh and gomen for the double reviews. My compooter is screwed up *takes out hammer and starts pounding it* oh... um *hides hammer behind back* ^^;; hehe... Um... *gets on her knees* CAN YOU PPPPLLLLLEEEEEAAAAASSSSSSEEEEE READ MY FIC?!! Memories in Kyoto PPPPPPPPWWWWWWWEEEEEAAAAAZZZZEEEEEE??!!! *puppy dog eyes* Please lemme know what you think! Keep writing and update!!! ^^
| Title: misstara
Reviewed By: mis_tara On: February 08, 2004 05:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT! You must right more!!! plz....
| Reviewed By: silverdemon87 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2004 22:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is something new... It's pretty good only one thing (Yes, there's always something isn't there?)... In the first chapter, Saitou seems a little OOC... THAT'S JUST MY OPINION! heh... To me, I see Saitou as a more of a callous character so I'm not so sure if he would actually try to help Faith but rather she would go to him... but it's your fic so I'm just gonna leave it at that. As for Faith, she doesn't remember who she really is... Try to bring more of her thought's out. In this fic, the story revolves around Faith and her past. I would think that by reflecting her thoughts on the situation would have more of an impact... not that it doesn't... Besides that well... about Kenshin. Yeah, I'm such an RK fan that I know all the characters by heart... heh, I know... anyways, in the anime series, they do a really lame translation of you know, "I will do that, that I will." Sheesh, it's ridiculous! You don't have to do this if you don't want to... I wouldn't put Kenshin repeating his sentences... heh... but that's just me ^^ Well, I think I'm running a little long (a little?!) so see ya and be sure to update!
| Reviewed By: silverdemon87 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2004 22:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is something new... It's pretty good only one thing (Yes, there's always something isn't there?)... In the first chapter, Saitou seems a little OOC... THAT'S JUST MY OPINION! heh... To me, I see Saitou as a more of a callous character so I'm not so sure if he would actually try to help Faith but rather she would go to him... but it's your fic so I'm just gonna leave it at that. As for Faith, she doesn't remember who she really is... Try to bring more of her thought's out. In this fic, the story revolves around Faith and her past. I would think that by reflecting her thoughts on the situation would have more of an impact... not that it doesn't... Besides that well... about Kenshin. Yeah, heh, I'm such an RK fan that I know all the characters by heart... heh, I know... anyways, in the anime series, they do a really lame translation of you know, "I will do that, that I will." Sheesh, it's ridiculous! You don't have to do this if you don't want to... I wouldn't put Kenshin repeating his sentences... heh... but that's just me ^^ Well, I think I'm running a little long (a little?!) so see ya and be sure to update!
| Title: soo kawaii
Reviewed By: RFP On: January 04, 2004 12:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's sooo kawaii!!! keep writing!! I luv it so far! keep up such interesting fics!!! I'll be looking everyday!! HEe hee! Kawaiiii!!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: Snowangel_Yuka [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2003 23:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fic. is really interesting so far so please keep writing . By the way, is Kaoru going to teach Faith her fighting techniques because it might help her since she is so good at dodging things.
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