Reviewed By: Joanna [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2003 06:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked the way you wrote this, and I haven't actually seen a fic with this kind of plot line, so points for originality. You didn't do so good with spelling and grammar, but I'm very picky (because I'm a professional writer). What I noticed most was you tended to write "Hello" rather than "Hello," for example. That doesn't mean it's not a good fic, just I would lay it out differently. It was a very cutesy, pretty, fun fic to read which is why I gave it "10" enjoyment factor. :D Keep writing.
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