| "The attack of the bishies" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: My newest opinion
Reviewed By: Blackhawk On: November 09, 2003 17:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like i said in my last E-mail this stroy kicksass!! Make sure however that you describe the love scenes better! P.S. my update should be up sometime soon, my mom went out of town so me and my dad are having a real problem with it being guys week out instead of night out! NO clean clothes! Pizza every night and no complaints! (except for the school who wants to know why i come in at like 12:50 p.m. for school every day!) Email me!
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Reviewed By: fangirlofinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2003 16:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
two words loved it! CONTINUE!
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: November 06, 2003 09:42 CST
Comment/Review:
Good story. Looking forward to finding out how everything turns out. Thanks for writing!
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Reviewed By: Inu Lover On: November 06, 2003 01:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely fantastic story. Gotta tell you, you had me ROLLING on the floor. those poor guys sssooo deserve it. Please update soon, can't live without!!
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Reviewed By: Miko_Snow Godess_Me [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2003 08:10 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG this is great! It's too funny, but I feel kinda sorry for the guys! keep it up and update soon.
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Title: absolutely love it!!
Reviewed By: Queen Klu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2003 18:54 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!!!!!!!!!!! It's SO FUNNY! you have GOT to write more, and soon, cause i might just hurt somebody unless i read more...
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