| "A Step in Life" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: there is no point to writing a title here...is there?
Reviewed By: inuyasha loves me not signed in On: June 29, 2004 21:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your writing it is a really cute peice of work!!!!!!! The only problem i have is your paragraph sizes...please try to make them smaller it is hard for me to read your story at points...because the paragraoh is so long that i lose my place half way threw! lol...but i love your writing and please atke into concideration what i have said!!!!!! AND YOUR FICTION IS WONDERFUL!!! KEEP IT UP!!!!
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Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2004 01:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
Cute fic ^_^ Too bad the toad wasn't handy for introductions ... although that would have cut the story short. And having Kouga rescue everyone ... hahaha ... or is that still a dream sequence? It's late, I'm beyond tired and couldn't stop reading ^_^ ah well ... I'll come back and re-read it when I'm awake.
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Reviewed By: iire [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2004 20:25 CST
Comment/Review:
update plz. good so far, bot u cant really tell yet.
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