| "Behold the Power of...Watermelon?" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: inuyasha15 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2009 17:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was cool. I liked the fluffyness of the story. I hope you keep on writing more inuyasha fics.
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Title: Watermelon!
Reviewed By: Kove_Aiden On: June 21, 2004 15:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was awesome wouldnt change a bit!it was a really cute story ! as you put it a fluff story =)=)=)=)=)=)=)=)=)=)=)=)=)=) it was really great!(ps would make a great episode!)
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Reviewed By: InsaneAuthoress [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2004 19:12 CST
Comment/Review:
YAY it's been a while sience i've had a good helping of fluff! *jumps into a swimming pool of fluff* WHOHO! it was sweet!
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Reviewed By: TopazQueen1188 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2003 04:47 CST
Comment/Review:
dude this is so adorable I luv it! It's really funny with the stream splashing and him getting his fangs stuck in the melon n than it's really just.. realistic when u have him kiss her cuz it's like: he was licking up the juices from the water melon and simple in it's childish way-like no heavy "I Love You's" to tie it down just a sinple kiss. Real nice. Liked that a lot! Totally cute!
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Reviewed By: erinlin On: December 06, 2003 18:28 CST
Comment/Review:
it's fluff-tacular!
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Reviewed By: MissNikki On: December 05, 2003 06:34 CST
Comment/Review:
so good that's all i'm gonna say because my grandmother is looking at me like i'm crazy because of the shouted YaY!
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Reviewed By: Crest On: November 16, 2003 21:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG That was simply wonderful. I'm very picky about the inu yasha fan fics I read. I've been in love with the series for 3 years and I tend to get bothered easily by the wild stories that people write. But you had such a lovely grasp on the characters personalities. I enjoyed the whole theme of the story so I have to give you a perfect rating. If you write any more inu yasha fics I will be sure to read.
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Title: FLUFF! YAYAAYAYAYAY!
Reviewed By: Queen Klu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2003 15:11 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I LOVE fluff!!!!! you hardly ever find any good fluff stories out there, but i really like yours! hooray for fluff and watermelon!
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