| "You Said You Loved Me, Right?" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: *avid reader* On: April 29, 2005 12:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: again.
Reviewed By: Azurehiro On: November 26, 2004 13:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I forgot to take part in the rating system, sorry to post another in the same minute. 7 specifically because of the length in some chapters, but I believe you explain a lot in your writing, which makes it so lengthy. That is okay though, unlike other author's who tend to get the reader lost in whoknow'swhat.
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Reviewed By: Azurehiro On: November 26, 2004 13:00 CST
Comment/Review:
I also reviewed on your fanfiction (dot) net account but I would like to see what fanfiction (dot) net would not let you post as of yet. You really changed the prologue, I think it better suits the story, sorry fanfiction (dot) net is going through its little crisis so you cannot post it up.
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Reviewed By: Random Mediaminer On: November 26, 2004 05:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey just wanted to say that i read your fic and it was good, keep it up
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Title: Response to Midnighty
Reviewed By: The Souija [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2004 15:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
sorry for my laziness at responding, i was just finsihing up on the new chapters for this saga and i am proof reading them before posting them up. Don't worry too much about the Japanese, i always put the translations at the end of each chapter but if you need help with any other translations i can always help you, just send me a word you are having trouble with and i can tell you what it means ^_^
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Reviewed By: Midnighty On: October 14, 2004 15:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
I CANNOT TRANSLATE THE JAPANESE!! *cries* can u plz?
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Title: Maybe i should write you a REAL review this time
Reviewed By: Chikan Gurl On: January 04, 2004 09:57 CST
Comment/Review:
Geez, it is quite shocking to see that you can hardly spell good in a comment and i'm younger than you. lol. But so on, when are you gointa update, i wanta read more on this. For the most part, you deserve more reviews but you should write more in order to get more. you are always off drawing other things insteand when you should work on this more, so there. no yuugiou, this. the writing and atmosphere you get from your story portrays the feel that this is an actual episode of yuutuu hakusho. your character is possibly one of the well developed caracters i have read about iun a long time. well job to you i guess. as long as you have fun, who cares how many reviews you get or din't get.
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Title: Thaz Black-mail hun
Reviewed By: The Souija [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2003 23:26 CST
Comment/Review:
Hmmm, I surrender to you, courtney dear! Your darling lil' Teruyo will fit in jus find wif der storyline, of course! I as much time as I can in the wee hours of tha night jus for to play Xenosaga and "try" to get better then me! MWAHAHAHA!!!! I'm so glad u like tha story--whoa, you think I'm that good with YYH?!?!? aww schucks *hugglez*! Thanks for the humble, yet threatening, compliment Courtney! teehee ^_~
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Reviewed By: Chikan Gurl On: December 09, 2003 02:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
So this is your final work eh. so this is why you been staying up so late working on i c! its true when i say hailey is the yuugiou no otaku and you are the yuyuhakusho no otaku sister. lol. but so on, your writing is alot detailed. ALOT detailed. i find your style quite favorful. i wanta read more, so stay up late again and work on it whyle you let me play on your PS2 again. lol. ((could you put my caracter in your story too! pleez! or i'll tell every1 your middle name!)) lol.
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