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Title: (Inhales)
Reviewed By: TAB [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2004 12:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.O What's gong on? WAHHH! I wan't to know!!! You HAVE to update soon!!! The suspense is killing me!!! Another great chapter. You just bring me in and keep me! I don't know how you do it. . . . Hey just out of curiousity, is Cassie going to find out about Bakura soon? I dunno, I'm just obsessed with him and he hasn't been in. . . . . Anyway, I loved this chapter and I want to find out what happens! Please update soon! Like, before next Saturday?? Please! ~ Tabby ~ P.S Can you do a 'P.S'? Anyway, I decided to put that at the end 'cause I just couldn't leave the review ending like that. .. . . Anyway I'm going to stop rambling or I'll get to - 7 again. ..
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Title: O.O
Reviewed By: TAB [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2004 15:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOoooooooooooooo!!!!! YOU can't do this to me!! Fine! I'll beat that little girls butt! *Runs off and stops* Wait, there's no one to stop me. . . . MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!! I will get her!!! To the fic ( I really need someone to keep me under control. .. ~.~") It was, once again, superbly written. I liked the duel, even though evil girl one. Keep up the good work. . . now! Off to read your other fic. .. Wait, what's the 'cahracters left' list on the bottom.. . Wow! It's going down. I wonder what'll happen when it reaches zero. Want to find out? Okay, what shall I ramble on about. Oh yeah! Kaiba, doing poetry? Wow! That's a first. Good rhyming though. ^^ I Would have never known. Hey Marik, can you wack the evil girl with mallet for me? No ONE EVERY HITS ON MY RYOU!!!!!! Don't worry, I'm not that mad. .. *Evil glare at Chrissy* Anyway, hey! I'm at 621! ^^ Wow! I used up TONS of characters. I'll have to type a lot more. I wonder if you run out you can't type anymore. I guess we'll see. You might be wondering how much longer this is going to go on right? Well you only have 392 left! ^^ YEAHHHH!!!! I just love your stories. You rule! Seriously! And all your fics rule too. ^-^ You're like, one of the top best writters at Media Miner AND Fan Fiction.net! ^^ I still have to do that welcome back thing. I wonder how I'll do it, when I'll do it.. . Maybe during a chapter of one of my fics. yeah! So be expecting a welcome back sometime in my other fics. Oh got to go by! -7 ^^
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Reviewed By: dude where's mah deck On: July 05, 2004 17:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
love chap 10
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Title: ^____^
Reviewed By: TAB [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2004 11:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Fuming* Evil Chrissy staring at MY RYOU!!!!!!!! EVIL!!! You go Cassie! Beat the little prissy's butt!!! I'm routing for you all-the-way!!! Another wonderful chapter that's just supurbly written. You always make the best chapters. Keep up the AWESOME work and update soon. Also, wow! You uploaded that chapter really soon. You surprised me. Can't wait 'till the next chapter so Cassie can whip that girls butt!!!!!
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Reviewed By: KaoriLindsayBlack [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2004 09:31 CST
Comment/Review:
I loved it almost as much as Ryou... wow thats scary
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Reviewed By: Rowan Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2004 10:27 CST
Comment/Review:
I likie the new chappie! And yes, my Ryou-fetish is kinda scary, so to prevent my family from getting traumatized I hide it from them. And I did like the chapter.
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Title: ^^
Reviewed By: TAB [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2004 23:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was funny with Cassie and the new girl. She is to peachy keen. ~_~ I feel for Cassie, I don't know how she's going to put up with that. . . Well, can't wait for the next chapter! I REALLY want to know what happens next! ^^ Please upload soon.
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Title: I LOVE THIS!!!!!!
Reviewed By: TAB [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2004 15:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I almost fainted with joy when I found out that you had uploaded another chapter. . .(Sighs). Well, lets get down to it. . . .I LOVE YOUR FIC!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE UPLOAD SOON!! I CAN'T STAND WAITING! THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST FICS I HAVE EVER READ! I can't wait to see what happens next! ^__^ Also. .(Gets an evil look). I'm going to force people to review your story. . . Mwahahahahahah!!!!!!!(Clears throat). Well, upload the next chapter soon! ^_^
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Reviewed By: nomie On: February 16, 2004 02:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I adore this series of fanfic it's fantastic i know i've only read a few so far but this must be my favourite i've been meaning to review for ages, i can't wait for the next chapter, hugely looking forward to it. I love this mysterious character Cassie i can't wait to hear more about her, like what happened to her parnets why she panicked in the principles office why she had to leave Cairo, and most of all how she duels against yugi You're a wonderful writer GO YUGIOH!!
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Reviewed By: Rowan Girl On: February 09, 2004 17:03 CST
Comment/Review:
this is really good, just update! *dreams of Ryou*
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Title: O.O
Reviewed By: TAB [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2004 19:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So that's why you wanted the gum and handcuffs. . . I feel sorry for Marik and Kaiba. Well, another great chapter!! I got the e-mail from Media Miner and it was soooo cool! ^____^ Well, when does Cassie find out about Bakura? And when does the new girl come? 'She's coming.' Is the new girl the one that's supposed to be evil or the other good one.(Sighs). To many questions. Well, upload the next chapter soon! Can't wait!
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Title: ^_____^
Reviewed By: TAB [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2004 19:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it that you didn't make Cassie win against Yugi. I don't like it when people make a character that is 'almighty'. You know what I mean? Like wins every duel, or everything. So, I really like this fic. Can you make there be more Ryou and Bakura?(They're my favorite characters in Yu-Gi-Oh). Oh, and when does Cassie find out about Bakura?? Oh, gosh, please upload the next chapter soon. This fic is really good!!!!
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Reviewed By: Samantha J.C On: January 19, 2004 02:06 CST
Comment/Review:
I love it! keep up the good work. I wanna find out what is with that neakless, and as for your 'useless' muses um I don't know what to say about or to them except: you 4 need to get a grip! disclaimers arent that bad and if they are to you then just let me do them....well thats all for now, please update soon!
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Title: not amk
Reviewed By: AMK [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2004 20:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This isn't amk! this is her sister! now that thats established- this is a pretty good fic. i have to admit i think your muses are the funniest part. i would like to see this continued, so keep it up!
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Title: (Sniff, sniff).
Reviewed By: TAB [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2004 20:58 CST
Comment/Review:
I want to read it sooooo bad!!! It sounds awesome!!! I hate that I have to wait three more months before I can read PG-13 fan fictions. This sucks. Well, it sound REALLY good. I'm sure that it's pwetty well written too. Sorry I couldn't give it an actual review. . . .
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