| "Lost Loves" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Kagome-chan2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 14:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another review! Couple of spelling mistakes (Kami not Kimi, Hentai not Hentay) other wise everything is awesome!!! plus every human makes mistakes! unless there demon or half demon? Are you!?!? I am!!! so good luck on future stories!!! Have fun writing your other stories!!! Bye - Bye See ya Love, Kagome-chan2004
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Reviewed By: Kagome-chan2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 14:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story!!! it is sooooooooo sad and heartbreaking to know that Kagome was forced to kill most of her friends! Naraku that ASSHOLE!!! But anyways, the story made me... cry a little bit but it was the best story i have read so far!
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Reviewed By: Phoxy_Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2004 22:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Style of Writing is a ten for the second and the third chapter...The first chapter was kind of jumbled togeather...I love the fic compleatly ^______^ You really must update soon!!!~~Later, the phox
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Reviewed By: luvjuliet2001 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2004 17:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
wow!!! please update soon so i don't have to die of waiting...
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Reviewed By: WinterWitch [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2004 17:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! I've heard where Kagome is possessed before, bt it's nothing quite like this, so the Originality rating is a nine. It's fun to read, but it would be easier if the formatting was different, so the Enjoyment actor is a very high nine. I like your style, but you have a few spelling mitakes, mostly on the Japanese words (by the way, it's 'hentai' and 'kami') so an eight for that. No grammar mistakes that I could see-then again, I have a few grammar mistakes too. Hey, we're all human. Erm, demon. Whatever.
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