| "Welcome to our world" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: inumaru12 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2004 10:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
yaa fun! please write more! it was really kool and awsome 2!
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Reviewed By: Tyson On: July 07, 2004 16:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ha ha ha ha! This chapter was hilarious! I loved it!!! Heehee Tamora and David remind me strongly of Sango and Miroku!!! lol Please write more soon!!! If you don't I'll bug you!! And just for the record Im the first one to review the second chapter!! Heehee oh and no wonder Tomora hates you for the David thing!!! -Bye!!!!! ^-^
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Title: (read the mindless ramblings before this comment
Reviewed By: Lord of the Rings Princess On: March 20, 2004 10:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow i'm going to review you again... just for fun!!!! Write the next chapter and you still LOVE Michael -as told on your story- Byebye!!! Michael and Ritsu-Chan sittin' in a tree K.I.S.S.I.N.G...... heh heh... Bye.
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Title: Bruised
Reviewed By: LillyAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2004 17:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You need to update soon. Hyper again. But sore from snowboarding. And yes to keep up tradition, Sideburns is evil, bacon is good. Update soon!
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Title: I found the story!!!
Reviewed By: Princess of Ithilin On: February 14, 2004 22:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi ritsu!! don't you love my name! I finally found your story (I've been meaning to for a long time!) Please don't blackmail me for my name i didn't know what else to do! Bacon good! Sideburns EVIL!!!! Oh I almost forgot........ good story even though i didn't get it because i don't know anything about it........ at all....... Bye ^_^ ^~^ ^_~ tee hee
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Reviewed By: the world champion (2) On: February 06, 2004 20:59 CST
Comment/Review:
oops i forgot to wrire that PLEASE post your yuri story I will be waiting to read it................
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Reviewed By: the world champion (2) On: February 06, 2004 20:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey ritsu great story! like my name? heehee any ways kairi of the phoneix DOES love tala, and go bacon! and sideburns is evil, AND i fell over laughing when i read the other reviews! anyways great story keep on writing! P.S. can you guess who wrote this? Heehee P.P.S. i"m hyper now can you tell?
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Reviewed By: Kairi of the Phoenix On: February 04, 2004 19:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I'm back! I'm not wiriting my evil rating until you psot your other story, you know which one I mean. Anyway, when are you gonna post next chapter? And I'll just follow the tradition, Sidburns is is evil. Bacon! I really like your writting style however, keep it up! PS. I don't love Tala.
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Title: Hyper
Reviewed By: LillyAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2004 21:47 CST
Comment/Review:
Lol. I read it again for the heck of it. Lol. Hyper. Again. Sideburns is evil. anyways, go Ritsu!!!!
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Title: HAHAHAHAHA
Reviewed By: ReDiCuLoUsLy_gOOdLooKiNg:) On: January 23, 2004 22:20 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
heh heh nice fanfic its great i luv the way that you started I can tell this is going to be hilarious Keep it up!!
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Reviewed By: Kairi the Child of Light On: January 21, 2004 16:57 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey Ritsu-chan! Very cool... But when do I come in? Post next chapter soon. Sideburns is evil. Anyway, I want to know what I'm gonna do in it and don't post your Yuri story. I'm serious. But it was cool.
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Reviewed By: Bakurik On: January 21, 2004 13:54 CST
Comment/Review:
That was awesome! I can't wait til you post the next chapter!
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