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"Holding On" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ]
 Reviewed By: ImaginativeMugwump27  On: February 02, 2004 22:17 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is a wonderful poem with confines the emotions of a millienia spirit who acts in ways that confuse, yet captivate the reader. Bakura-san is such a extraordinary person to write about, and so I hope you continue composing poems in which he can find many ways to express all his different kinds of emotions. The structure, mode, and feeling of this poem was outstanding, and I hope you continue to write like this. Cyas around!
 Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 25, 2004 15:19 CST
Comment/Review:
Not bad for a Bakura poem. But I think that it should have more about the darkness and the tormenting, cuz that's what Bakura is mostly about.

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