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| "Sharing the Darkness" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] | Reviewed By: justkat [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 07:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
Nice. Thank you. ^^
| Reviewed By: justkat [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 07:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
Nice. Thank you. ^^
| Title: kachinadancer2
Reviewed By: Kachinadancer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2004 21:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what a beautiful story, I totally relate to the aspect of friends becoming lovers and the problems that ensue... keep writing...wonderful
| Reviewed By: sadriethiel On: March 02, 2004 23:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kawaii. =] Actually, the ratings would be more like: 9, 10, 9, 15, and 10. Very enjoyable. The interspaced lyrics were annoying at times, though if I was familiar with the song I think that would help me identify with them better. A very nice, moving piece about this couple without anything... obnoxious. And without anything blatantly out of character, which happens too often. An enjoyable read- thanks.
| Reviewed By: SG On: February 18, 2004 07:30 CST
Comment/Review:
Still no rating, you know why... You've got a powerful writing, very nice (yhea, vocabulary failed me, it's not the half of the word you deserve) to read. Your kappa was wonderful, but your Hakkai is amazing. Loved the lines about the kiss as an act of agression : Bien vu. I did use it about Tenpou once... Once again, have a good time at writing as good pieces as this one and you'll make some readers very happy... Come to think of it, too bad I don't know the song you use for your fic, it would have been even nicer, I think...
| Reviewed By: SG On: February 04, 2004 12:16 CST
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1° (to get over with it) : no rating. I'm french, so I can't really judge your english-writing... But enjoyment was here, i'm sure of that. 2° Really loved this one, sensitive, nice tone... You've caught Gojyo, don't let him go... But Hakkai's POV would be nice, too... I wish you a lot of good writing... Hoping reading anything which could come after... Bye
| Reviewed By: goc On: February 03, 2004 12:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, i really really liked that! gojyo is my least favorite character, but it was so well written. are you going to continue? ::puppy eyes::
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