| "Fate as a Destiny" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Title: kool
Reviewed By: pure hope [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2005 08:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love ur story plz contine but sum times u mix up gohan with goten its a bit confusing but plz contine
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Reviewed By: Lady_Fate [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2004 13:02 CST
Comment/Review:
i think your fic is good, but sometimes u mix Goten up with Gohan so u say his name instead of Goten's. That's confusing
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