| "Final HeartBreak" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: Fun To Read
Reviewed By: MoonStarDutchess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2005 00:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed this fic. It was fun to read. I don't think you should continue it though. Sometimes the cliffhanger endings are good. If you have short stories you can write more about different topics and not have to worry about chapters and things. I hope to see alot more stories from you.
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Title: O___O
Reviewed By: sukiko-kun On: July 22, 2005 23:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
my brain just broke.. hm... i think this would be alot more smoother if you got a beta-er. somebody to read over and edit your work before you post it? it was pretty hard to read because of all the mis-spacing and a couple of spelling and paragraph errors. you also need more content. (it felt too rushed and too short and.. the end came too easily.) this story actually felt like it should have been a couple of more chapters long.. dont you think? BUT! i really loved how you voiced kagomes thoughts. she was saying things id never thought id hear her say!! XD thats great.
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Reviewed By: Tsukiyo_Kitsune_tears [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 21:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
MORE CHAPPIES!!!! you must make it longer!!!!! PLZ?!?!?!?
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Reviewed By: Kagome Girl On: May 18, 2004 16:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE CHAPPIES PLEASE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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