| "Happiness is..." Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2008 03:22 CDT
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this is a good story so far, i hope you update soon
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2005 21:39 CST
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Hiei... watching Soap Opera's? That's disturbing... but amusing at the same time... Just wanted to point out that the format in chapter 4 is screwed up... You can make sense of it, but there are some words missing. Are you going to continue this story? Please do! I'm curious to see how this progresses.
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Reviewed By: me of course On: May 02, 2004 22:09 CDT
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lol! figures he'd hear the word boxers with the thougths he's having. imagine if any other snippets he'd heard involved Keiko's words. ex: "...me on...you?" lol! update please!
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Title: keep it coming
Reviewed By: antisocial mint [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2004 00:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
haha funny i love how hiei is setting them up cute !!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Neptunes Daughter [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2004 17:04 CST
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That was good but very odd I am very bored so I will now go away, bye
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