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 Reviewed By: Earthy93 [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 24, 2004 18:03 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
You have a great idea combining these animes, the only problem is it is kind of bland, or vanilla. Try spicing it up a bit, put more action, descrption, or just adjectives in it. I can tell you are a good writer but you just need to start putting a little more of yourself, you could say, into your writing. If you do any of what I said then your fanfic will be ten times better then ever before.

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