| "Entity" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Title: starbrella
Reviewed By: Star-brella [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2004 16:13 CDT
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This is good! really really good! This is such an orginal fic, i don't think i've ever came across one like this one before! i love your plot and theme! and I think that this is a going really well. I look forward to reading the next chapter you put up. Update soon!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: b-chan2007 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2004 10:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! I didn't expect them to be related, I loved that little surprise there! ^_^; I loved how you had this chapter go and I don't think you could have ended on a better cliff hanger! Lol, keep up the GREAT WORK AND UPDATE SOON! Love your work so much! b-chan2007 ^_^
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Title: chapter 4
Reviewed By: b-chan2007 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2004 16:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this chapter! I liked the little flashback thing you had in it! Lol, she probably will be the death of him! I love getting to see those little flashbacks, they help with the story greatly! Keep up the GREAT work and I can't wait for the next update! SO UPDATE SOON!!! Lol. b-chan2007 ^_^;
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Title: chap. 3
Reviewed By: b-chan2007 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2004 18:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter, again! LOL, keep up the good work and I'm glad you let us get a look into the past! I love getting that extra info and I'm glad you used that in your chapter! UPDATE SOON! And keep working on this fic and think it'll turn out to be great! Hey and if you want a beta-reader I'd love to fill that position for you! b_chan2007@yahoo.com if you're interested! ;) b-chan2007
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Title: chap. 2
Reviewed By: b-chan2007 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2004 18:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again, great chapter! I love the story so far and hope that you continue! b-chan2007
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Reviewed By: WOW_i LiKE On: March 10, 2004 00:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn Man you have such a good fanfic and your thinking about whether or not to continue LoL I like it I really like it You shudd toatally finsh ...And I meant every word if you cant Sweet...your sadd if you dot though LoL just finsh aiight its cool cool cool az!!!
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Reviewed By: DBZ-FAN-JESSS On: March 04, 2004 00:55 CST
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OMG it is so wonderful I will be so dissappointed if you dont' continue... super plus plus plus... Jess
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Reviewed By: b-chan2007 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2004 17:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like what I see and I can be very picky when it comes to fanfics with Bulma and Vegeta in them! LOL, I love your fic so far and can't wait to see what you do with this fic! Keep up the good work and UPDATE SOON! b-chan2007 ;)
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Reviewed By: I don't have any. On: February 22, 2004 17:59 CST
Comment/Review:
This is a very interesting idea, and nicely written. I hope you can keep it up, give us an idea of how Bulma and Vegeta became the power of fire and water and what spilt them apart. Your description is very nice, clear and simple without overly flowery language. The poem at the beginning was also very nice, it set a good tone for the story. If you have a good idea, you should go with it, write and experiment, but don't wait on bated breath for the approval of another. Explore your talent and your craft, you have a good starting point, develop it. I for one would love to see where you can take this story.
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