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 Title: Nooooooooo!
Reviewed By: Amethyst_rosado  On: February 02, 2005 06:51 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ryoooooooooooooooouuuuuuuuuuuuu! Let him live! I'm only kinda a sadist! I hate it when Ryou dies! Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!
 Reviewed By: Katdragon [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 30, 2004 21:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
I didn't see much difference either, but it felt more like Yugi than Ryou... but that's just me. I prefer to have characters survive because remembering my friend, I just wished I was able to help. I read this one though because the reviews proved no one had died from it. ~~Kat
 Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 18, 2004 16:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
Aw, poor Yugi-chan, left alone in the darkness w/o any Yami around. Well, even though it's basically the same as Ryou's, I liked it. Nice and dark and angsty and bloody...ja ne!
 Title: Wow...
Reviewed By: RyousGirl567 [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 18, 2004 13:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
I don't notice that many changes... but it was still good! And both are fitting for... both! ^_~
 Reviewed By: Rowan Girl [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 18, 2004 10:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
i like it. the first one fits ryou and yugi, the modifications aren't really necessary.
 Reviewed By: RyousGirl567 [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 07, 2004 17:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow, I think I read your fics in backwards order... oh well, I liked them and that's what matters! This one was awesome! Btu I don't know if you should continue... I mean, I'm obsessed more than Rowan Girl with Ryou but the best fics leave poeple wanting more. If you do continue it, bring Ryou to survive! I can't stand to see him actually die! T_T
 Title: ryou's marshmellow
Reviewed By: ryou's kitty  On: March 19, 2004 16:59 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I know I just wrote,but I will never forget Ryou!! Never never never never!!!You will tell him that. I know I'm psyicic.oooooo
 Title: ryou's marshmellow
Reviewed By: ryou's kitty  On: March 19, 2004 16:44 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I thought it was a sad-true thingy.T_T. See i am crying? I'm not being sartastic.I think he should kill himsef and then agian I don't. I need to here something sad and something happy.
 Reviewed By: _Rowan Girl?  On: March 06, 2004 12:06 CST
Comment/Review:
oooh, and let Ryou live! I'm in love
 Reviewed By: _Rowan Girl_  On: March 06, 2004 11:19 CST
Comment/Review:
continue!
 Reviewed By: SFoxZone  On: March 05, 2004 20:34 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
It sounded more like Yugi not Bakura. You should have made it a Yugi one.
 Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 05, 2004 13:09 CST
Comment/Review:
^_^ Cool, I was right. Anyway, I think that it should stay a 1-shot fic, only cuz I don't like stories when a character tries to come back from the dead.
 Reviewed By: _UsagiGirl_ [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 29, 2004 14:25 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Lovely. You have great skill. Keep writing. I know the joy of depressing poetry, too. I don't know who it is. I'd like to think Ryou. He's rather depressed, and lots of reasons to be sad. But neither he nor Yugi have much of a family...(Ryou-Mother:dead Sister:dead Father: abandoned) I'd like to think it's actually Marik... seems to suit him. If you ever tell, I'll be eager to hear who it is. Keep writing! ~~_UsagiGirl_
 Reviewed By: Casey K [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 29, 2004 03:09 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I think it's definitely Yugi... I mean, come on - the Bakura in the series isn't going to say that he would never leave Ryou! Yami, however, would. Great fic, by the way!
 Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 28, 2004 19:31 CST
Comment/Review:
Hmm...it has a Ryou sort-of feel to it, so I'm gonna say that it was about him. Anyway, it's very good, I love the angst and the blood. Ja ne
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