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Reviewed By: SRP On: May 09, 2005 21:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
*-* good inu...*cough* i mean bad bad boy! ::sweat drops:: hee hee bye!
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Reviewed By: Inu-Shinta [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2005 00:00 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
It kills me that this is a one-shot. You should expand the story, or write a sequel. I love stories where kagome gains hanyou/youkai status and mates with Inuyasha, and only Inuyasha, more than one female mate is okay, but Inuyasha has to love each of his mates, or just Kagome.
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Title: Myli
Reviewed By: Sesshs girl On: November 23, 2004 14:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved your story.Even though it wasn't Sesshoumaru it was still pretty good.
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Reviewed By: ookami san the animelover [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 10:21 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
i liked it!!!!!!!!! more!!
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Reviewed By: lover girl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2004 17:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was realy good! please contuin it.
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Reviewed By: squirrelboy On: April 04, 2004 10:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
its funny write more
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Reviewed By: squirrelboy On: April 04, 2004 10:21 CDT
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Reviewed By: Star keeper [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2004 21:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEEEEEEEEZE CONTINUE THIS FIC!!!!!!!!!! it's a very interesting twist of fate... sweetness!!! :-P
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Title: RESPONSE
Reviewed By: LoupeyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2004 23:05 CST
Comment/Review:
I CANNOT STEAL SOMETHING I HAVE NEVER READ. THIS THING TOOK ME HOURS TO WRITE AND I REALLY DO NOT APPRECIATE YOUR ACCUSATION.
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Title: sweet
Reviewed By: Inuyasha is a total hotty [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2004 18:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
asume dude or dudet whatever. That's a great story. It's just soo..um...sweet. Theres no words to explain how giood this story is! PEACE OUT
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Reviewed By: Hino Mitsukiko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2004 16:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
We~ll...the originality rating was 9/10 'cause I've seen lots of fics where Inuyasha gets even with Kagome by getting a subduing necklace. And the word was 'stay' too. Now about the citrus content...One, it was WAY out of character. Two, Inuyasha wouldn't have the resources to do that. Three, he would NEVER admit that someone/something was scary/powerful, even to himself. Four, it went too fast, really really too fast. For example, Kagome is a good girl, she wouldn't get aroused that easily. And Inuyasha wouldn't be thinking such things, no matter how close he got to her. Also, Inuyasha would never suggest that they do what they did. Now, I'm not trying to spoil your fun and ideas, but it's just constructive critisizm. I'm trying to help you out here by suggesting how to improve on your belief factor. The main thing that most fanfic readers look for is if the characters are true to their personality as described/revealed in the original material. If you might have questions/comments/notes, just ask me, I know everything about Inuyasha. Jaa na and happy writing! ^^
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Reviewed By: Rowan Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2004 20:27 CST
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hee hee, wonderful!
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Title: EEE!!!
Reviewed By: colaDRAGON [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2004 19:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great stuff I tell you!!! ^_^! I know this is a one shot (though what a one shot is varies from author to author so maybe this problem doesn't really exist and I am making my self worry over nothing...), but it would be so incredibly awesome if you continued writing this. I would love you. Big heart! Ok, if that didn't work then whatever. Love you're story!!! Read mine..? Yes, do as you please, just don't stop writing!!!
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Reviewed By: someonesomewhere On: March 31, 2004 15:28 CST
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Hi im K005 i loved your fic pls update
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Reviewed By: brittany On: March 26, 2004 00:14 CST
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loved the one-shot!
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