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Reviewed By: stix On: July 28, 2005 18:30 CDT
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i loved this story. it was great. please add more to this story soon.
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Reviewed By: DamnBlackHeart On: July 02, 2005 17:29 CDT
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This is a very goog fanfic but I believe you can do better. Either way I still enjoy reading your story. It's good. Keep writing! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Yumiko Yoshihana [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2004 14:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good fic. It was a little confusing spliting the POV's to every other chapter, but I quickly got over it. :) I found a lot of things were very similer to things I saw in other shows and eppisodes of YYH, and the charactiers are a "little" out of character, and the oc's arent explained a lot, but I like it. Its good. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: AMK [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 08:19 CDT
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DUDE!! ^^ Yay! On to part two! This review makes no sense at all...
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Reviewed By: AMK [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 12:00 CDT
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Part Two? There's going to be a part two? As a different fic or what..... um, names, names.... uh.... can't think of any at the moment. *sweatdrop* I'll get back to you on that.... good chapters. ^^
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 19:59 CDT
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Darn cliffies. Evil things. Cool, a little bit of Raye/Ajo stuff. ^^ Umm, ideas... Breaking Barriers? (cause they're breaking into Paradise) Ok, update soon!
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 15:59 CDT
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I bet Hiei does that to Kurama a lot.^^ Good chapter, update soon!^-^
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Reviewed By: AMK [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 09:47 CDT
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I can just see Hiei waking Kurama up like that... *spasms of giggles* I would make a fanart of that if I didn't draw like crap.... *sweatdrop* Well, good chapters, as per the norm. Why the heck did I say that.... *shrugs* Okay, I reviewed. UPDATE!!! ^^
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Reviewed By: AMK [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 09:46 CDT
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I can just see Hiei waking Kurama up like that... *spasms of giggles* I would make a fanart of that if I didn't draw like crap.... *sweatdrop* Well, good chapters, as per the norm. Why the heck did I say that.... *shrugs* Okay, I reviewed. UPDATE!!! ^^
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 23:43 CDT
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I have already suffered from two cliffhangers from fics I like today. Another one is horrible. Completely killed my happiness that you updated. Update. NOW. Other than that, good chapter. ^-^
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2004 16:57 CDT
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getting into Paradise? Couldn't they have waited until a decent hour, like 8? Ugh... Yes, a BIG piece of cake. With ice cream. Yes, that works. Anyway, update soon!
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Reviewed By: AMK [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2004 19:12 CDT
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The chapter was kinda short, but funny! ^^ I would have tossed water at someone too if they woke me up at two in the morning. And then I would run like the dickens. Especially if it was Hiei. But then he's a lot faster than me so he would catch me... sorry, drifted off subject there. V. entertaining chapter anyway. I can actually visualize all that in my head... ^^
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Reviewed By: AMK [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2004 18:33 CDT
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The chapter was kinda short, but funny! ^^ I would have tossed water at someone too if they woke me up at two in the morning. And then I would run like the dickens. Especially if it was Hiei. But then he's a lot faster than me so he would catch me... sorry, drifted off subject there. V. entertaining chapter anyway. I can actually visualize all that in my head... ^^
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2004 15:46 CDT
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Augh... a meetinga two AM? I might be one of the few people who would still be awake... What's the meeting about? Ok, update soon!
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Reviewed By: AMK [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 19:00 CDT
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btw I'm adding this to my favorites.
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