Title: hey
Reviewed By: me On: September 04, 2004 20:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it alot because you are good and that makes the writing good. So...I guess that all of that is a good thing. Yeah...um... the only thing that I wish to point out is that the story is not complete. It is sort of...broken. It ends so abruptly it makes me think that you didn't really get the whole story in. It doesn't truthfully have Noshiro "step in" in the story either. Just a thought. Hope that you have a chance to replace the ending soon with a completed sentence at least. Forgive me if that sounded crude. It was not meant to, I am simply attempting to point out the facts. The stories are great so please continue as soon as possible. Not to sound wierd or anything, but I will be watching. I wish to continue reading anything you come up with. Your writing is supurb...hehe...supurb, an awkward word. Anyways, I hope that you have more soon and that school actually gives you more opprotunities rather than less time on your hands. I shall talk to you later then. ~
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