| "The Darkness Absorbes All" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: YYF12 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 13:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's really good! ^^
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Reviewed By: kirei rose [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2004 21:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
whoops typo i meant plot line is 2 words not one
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Reviewed By: kirei rose [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2004 18:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
oh and plot lin ei s 2 words genius
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Reviewed By: kirei rose [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2004 18:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
and what do you mean an origanal plotline!?!?!?!?!?! this is my story I ncan make it whatever I want and you're lucky I haven't killed everyone by now usually I would have so grr
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Reviewed By: kirei rose [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2004 18:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
no not really I don't have spell check on the program I use because if my program with spell check doesn't work on here do gr bite me and it's not like anyone cares anyway you can still read it ! you get the point so whaever don't dis my spelling
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Title: Disturbing that you have a keyboard
Reviewed By: Chrislea [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2004 17:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Have you considered using spell check? How about an original plotline? Your title, sor example, should be, The Darkness ABSORBS All.
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Reviewed By: Matty14 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2004 00:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow! This seems like a really cool fic. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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