| "College Life in the Real World" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: Veggie_Luva_101 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2006 21:24 CST
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YEAH!!! he is an a-hole! ...even if i didn't understand most of his reveiw... i knew it was mean, pointless, and worthless!! i mean, come on, just look at the idiodic name he must have STRIVED to come up with! COME ON!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Veggie_Luva_101 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2006 21:17 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update. now. YES!!!!!
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Title: I like it!!!!
Reviewed By: Linw [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2006 13:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
don't take the reviews of Fuckstick serious!! he is just a asshole!! i like your story very very very much!! please continue! i really like this story and i want to read a next chapter! please? Linw
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Reviewed By: MysticRose [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2005 00:45 CST
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Alright "fuckstick". You're telling me I don't have a life, when you're spending all your time flaming me, and actually caring answer me? Excuse me if I happen to like writing and tring to do my best at it. And you certainly are one to talk about being a pansy, seeing as how you haven't had the balls to even leave your email address. And plz, consider getting a little class. If you think my story sucks, tell me how to fix it, not insult me and my family like you did. Thanks "Road" Da Rula, for giving me good constructive criticism. I really think "fuckstick" could learn from your example. And one more thing, "fuckstick": If you hate my story so much, THEN STOP READING IT, DUMBASS!! Is that really so hard to comprehend?
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Title: Good Story
Reviewed By: "Road" Da Rula On: March 29, 2005 06:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heh...It was a good story,very creative But i think fuckstick is right (Despite the fact that he's a fucking maniac that needs to be sedated in order to think straight)it could be a little more creative. And You should try making extra chapters :-)
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Title: Dungeons and Dragons
Reviewed By: Fuckstick On: March 29, 2005 06:34 CST
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....*LOL* Ohhh my god!*LOL* this stupid muthafucka really has nuthing better in his life? Did my earlier remark ruffle ya shitty Feathers? Well grow some nuts and get the stick out ya ass! Lighten up bitch! U make it sound like this is your whole occupation?Like its your fucking world! PS:And go ahead and revise this peace of shit that was mistaken for fanfiction!It still aint gonna stop me from flamen it. Fuckin pansy...Heh (Scoffs and Walks off)
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Title: MysticRose529
Reviewed By: MysticRose [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2005 00:00 CST
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~sigh~ The real loser and dork here is the idiot who has nothing better to do with his time than leave immature flames about nothing in particular. Plz. At least have the decency to say something constuctive. But I will thank this imbecile for one thing: this flame has just given me the incentive to work on this one again, and make it as good as I can so I can show this dumbass just how feebleminded he really is, and just how talented I can be. Just give me some time folks. I'll make this cretin eat his words. I hope he knows how to swallow; though I'm sure he does, seeing as how he knows so much about blow jobs, I'm sure he has plenty of experience. ;-) Cya 'round folks. I'm gonna have fun with this one.
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Title: Fuckstick
Reviewed By: Hairy Ass vagina On: March 25, 2005 04:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
*LOL* you fuckin dork LOLOLOL your probably a fuckin loser in real life that gets beat up and gets his fuckin lunch money stolin worthless pile of shit,get a life go get a girlfriend GO THROWN A FOOT-BALL FOR CRIST SAKE YA WIMP *Murmers to himself* fuckin wimps always makin fantasy stories tryna be cool n think its funny. heres a story for ya!:Goku and vegeta come to real life and have to live with you.After an hour vegeta ties you up and hands un upside down from a tree like a pinata and beats the shit outta you!While this is goin on goku coaxes your little fag-bag brother into suckin his cock because he thinks its a lolipop and after vegeta beats you to death and goku cums in your cousin's mouth they robe you blind then vegeta does a bib bang attack on your house and they fly off..And the only thing left is rubble and your lifeless body hanging from a tree.Oh ya and when vegeta delivered the final blow to your ribcage you simotaniously shitted yourself bitch! ..........uhh....Vagina-geta
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Title: look i made it
Reviewed By: madame shannon On: June 28, 2004 15:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
look i made it back!! aren't you happy for me? by the way thanx again for piccilo, i can't wait to read more :D
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Reviewed By: inumaru12 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2004 10:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! cooly cooly cooly cooly cooly! update more update more!!!!
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Reviewed By: Celestial Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2004 00:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cute story! I can't wait to read more. The thought of Vegeta and Goku loose on a college campus is kindy scary. LOL. I hope they don't hurt anyone. =P Update soon.
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