Title: Please, This Is Only Meant To Help...
Reviewed By: sephlier [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2004 22:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm not going to rate this. It wouldn't be fair of me. I have glanced at a couple other stories that you have written. You have some serious spelling issues that need to be dealt with. You also need to take a look at your formatting, at least on this story-I didn't spend too much time time looking at the other ones, sorry. The formatting is very..."blocky," there are no breaks between paragraphs or quotations. I'd be willing to help you at least correct the spelling issues. I am not familiar with the different types of formatting so I don't know if I can help you in that regard or not. It appears that I am logged in so my screen name should show up in light blue. Just follow the link to my contact information if you would like for me to help you with some of the issues that this story is having. If something has happened to the information in my biography my email address is: sephlier@yahoo.com. I have Yahoo Instant Messenger and AIM (but I only use it on some weekends). Feel free to contact me, I'll do my absolute best to help ^_^ ~sephlier (oh, I am NOT flaming you! I really would like to help you if you feel you need it)
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