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Title: I liked new path
Reviewed By: lil-juice-09 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2006 15:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i am writin u a review 2 let u no that i like this fan fiction. i read the whole thing n i liked it. wen kaiba fused his two thunder dragons into twin-headed thunder dragon to use on yuna in luca its attack is not 2200 it is 2800. but other than that keep up the good work n maybe you can become a true author. Bye! P.S. you shoud read my fan fiction too. you may like mines.
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Reviewed By: PROTOTYPE Uber Rei Model 00 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2004 20:47 CDT
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YEAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!!! I can't wait to see the sequel! Believe me, 'll be checking EVERY DAY! for Spira's Tournament! And what a fitting end! :D Rikku! Came to Domino! will she and Malik get along? Will Lenne and Shuyin be present in the next story!? How will Malik and Ryou get along!? WHEEE! So many questions...need answers....graggh...
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Reviewed By: am_pris On: August 18, 2004 08:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked your story. :) I would never have thought of that! :) I didn't really partically like reading the duel parts, but it was great as a whole :)
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Reviewed By: Mel Meiko Mei Ling (not logged in) On: August 17, 2004 15:24 CDT
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What a great duel! Yuna's cards are all over the place, but still, this chapter had a great upbeat pace and flow, with plenty of personality sprinkled throughout. Amazing. -Mel
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Reviewed By: Lady D 10290 (Not logged in) On: August 16, 2004 23:21 CDT
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Me: Great chapter. Go Yuna! I was really shocked to see how Mokuba acted. But even I have to admit Seto was being a jerk. *Glares at Seto* Speaking of whom. *Grabs his ear and drags him away like Max does to Brock.* Now Seto, you and I are going to have a long, long talk! Brittany: To be honest you actually did have us going there with Yuna surrendering. We were like "WHA!?" Me: I have another feeling! I think maybe what Yuna will have seto do involves a cutsey, hyper, lovable, (and to lonely guys around the world) hot thief girl. ^_^ Though I have to say I wish Toon Dark Magician Girl was in the duel. In my opinion, she is the cutest little duel monster. Well actually it's bit of a three way tie between Toon DMG, Kuriboh, and Watapon. Brittany: Um aibou. Me: Oh sorry. Anyway I can't believe the last chapter is next. And no one besides Tea got to meet LeBlanc. *Still has that little scene in head* Oh well, anyway I can't wait for the last chapter and the sequel.
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Reviewed By: PROTOTYPE Uber Rei Model 00 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2004 23:18 CDT
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YES! YYYYYEEEEEEEESSSS! Kaiba! Got! His! Ass! Kicked! [Everyone cheers and waves banners] I'm going to call the hospital, because of the cliffy you put at the end, which resulted in me having a brain anyersum.
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Reviewed By: Cloud Strife!! On: August 15, 2004 03:17 CDT
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this is the best fan fic ive ever read please update it it is very intriguing please write some more you will be a real hit.
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Reviewed By: PROTOTYPE Uber Rei Model 00 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2004 11:55 CDT
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ARGH! I'm gonna maul you! Another cliffy!? [Weeps] YUNA~!!!! Update...soon...? My heart!
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Reviewed By: PROTOTYPE Uber Rei Model 00 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2004 01:37 CDT
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[Does a happy jig] OOH~ What's gonna happen!? You can't let Yuna lose! ARGH! I want sin to come back and just /SQUASH/ Seto~!!!
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Reviewed By: Lady D 10290 (Not logged in) On: August 07, 2004 20:23 CDT
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Me: I had to review here instead of FF.Net because the FF.Net review thing is busted for a short time. Anyway, Seto is never going to stop being a moron. I loved the part where Pegasus gave Rikku the Toon monsters. ^_^ That was cute. Anyway update soon.
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Reviewed By: PROTOTYPE Uber Rei Model 00 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 22:59 CDT
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:o Oh snap. Kaiba's gonna get his ass whooped.And I see...I read a fic that was a corssover between FF7/YGO, and it was only a duel fic! Ugh!It made me so angry, the whole thing was nothing but a boring old duel! I'm sure you'll be able to keep me hooked! I await, patiently, your next update! [Salute]
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Reviewed By: IMPROVED Uber Rei Model 00 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 11:27 CDT
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[Voictory fanfare plays] WOO! ^_^ [Is actually playing th esong right now] XD You update FAST! How do you do it? Ryou is safe ponce more, if for just a little bit! :O Bakura is hot, but I think Ryou should civilize him ( And by civilize I mean break the habit of him stealing people's souls.) Agh...Stupid MM.org, won't let me get on!!
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Reviewed By: PROTOTYPE Uber Rei Model 00 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 16:26 CDT
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Rarrrgh! Rikku! Aw, if Rikku hadn't been so cocky....Oh well. [Glomps Rikku] Favorite Character, I forgive you!
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Reviewed By: PROTOTYPE Uber Rei Model 00 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2004 14:27 CDT
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Yay! You updated! I'm very happy! But...the cliffhanger....hurts my heart....[Shies away from Logos] ^_^;;; Make him hurt.....he's creepy...
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Reviewed By: PROTOTYPE Uber Rei Model 00 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2004 13:51 CDT
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Yes! I'd have to say that you totally rock! the first FFX-2/Yugioh Crossover ever! Everyone is in character! will rikku ever be able to meet Yami Bakura [Har, theif meets theif]? :D I'd have to say that Rikku is my favorite character, as is Yuna. GO YUNA! ^_^ Please update soon...
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