Reviewed By: Tyler Durden2003 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2005 08:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
That didn't make any sense. There was no plot, in which case there's no point in writing the story and wasting everyone's time. There needs to be more description so that the narrative makes sense. I don't know if the character's personalities were true to the TV series or not because the fic isn't long enough for me to find out. Next time, why don't you try proof reading your work and thinking about what you want the narrative to be about before you start writing it? I'm sure there are some punctuation mistakes in there too. Again, proof reading will help.
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