| "between the species" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: Licon On: January 17, 2005 17:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked your fic, but I could not read it. Your grammer is horrable. It is hard to read the story. I can generoly over look such things, sence I suck at it, but yours is awfull. please revise. I would love to read it. look for unfinished words too. and kagome wants to die in the fire? explane more about her home life. But you have a great idea going for you.
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Reviewed By: Arienishi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2004 23:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please, im begging yah here. Make a sequal. It is so good!!
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Reviewed By: Tsukiyo_Kitsune_tears [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 14:17 CDT
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AWWWWWWWW, the story is done!! well, at least there is a sequal!!!!!!!!! now i have to go look for it. BYEZ!!!!
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Reviewed By: Inuluvher151 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2004 06:23 CDT
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hey this is a good story so will the arrow still kill inuyasha even though he is human? o wells i guess i will find when you update which i hope is soon
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Reviewed By: Inuluvher151 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2004 20:18 CDT
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hey great story keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: Tsukiyo_Kitsune_tears [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2004 13:37 CDT
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Once aain, nothing to say. But PLZ update real soon!! i totally luv this story!!!!^__~
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Reviewed By: Inukame [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 13:22 CDT
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Oh by the way your spelling isn't that bad. I have wors than you have. Go and see yourself. Great story like I already said-
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Reviewed By: Inukame [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 13:21 CDT
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Two cahpters! Ou wau! That's great! Well I hope ones again that you will update asap. I like reading this, it made my day little bit brither.
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Reviewed By: Inukame [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2004 16:22 CDT
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Interesting story. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Tsukiyo_Kitsune_tears [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2004 14:03 CDT
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Update! *sigh* i have been asking people to update all afternoon so now i have nothing new to say. Still, Plz update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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