Reviewed By: Samantha J.C On: June 26, 2004 04:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
The last part in the 6th chapter really gave me a brain freez...I'm not sure if Yami Bakura is a friend or foe so I cant wait untill the next chapter to find out! one thing though...you need to work on your spelling and sentence structure a little more in certain places. I sugest you try writting a little more slowly to be sure of less mistakes. Anyway you have a really great story going so keep up the good work! Hope to see the next chappie soon.
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