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| "Home" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: RyousGirl567 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2007 10:57 CST
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Awww! Reading your later works and then reading your earlier works is just like comparing a drawing you made in 6th grade to one you made in 3rd; the latter was the best you could do at the time, and still good, but just the precursor to the excellence of the first. *sigh* Now that my strange comparison is out of the way… I'm also big on writing songfic one-shots (although, at the moment I'm working on a multiple-song songfic where each new song is a different chapter in the same story). That was neat how the lyrics were also used in the actual story sections (e.g. You turn off the TV and you scream at me and "You turn off the TV and start screaming at me"). Very cool. ^_^ It may look short and underdeveloped, but that is the thought at just a quick glance. When one delves deeper into the actual words, these words run deep. The ending had quite a cool effect when the confession was spread out between lyrics. Isn't that always the case? We can love someone so much it hurts, even if aforementioned person is the one hurting us. *sigh* It never ends. (By the way, that wasn't meant to say you're using an overused idea 'cause that idea is the very premise of the majority of Ryou/Bakura fics out there) Another great piece by the mastery that is your writing! ^_^ Happy writings! ~Tori-chan~
| Reviewed By: Himitsu_Dorobou On: October 16, 2006 22:50 CDT
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Hm. Wow, looking through an older one now. The grammar was sketchy, and there wasn't much in the way of content, but you did get the point across, I suppose. It would also be better if it came to any sort of conclusion, instead of merely repeating the song lyrics. I can really tell how far you've gone to becoming a better writer...congrats on that. *thumbs up*
| Reviewed By: mademoiselle nom de plume nli On: May 23, 2006 10:11 CDT
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Hey Theresa, that's a great songfic. You're an awesome writer. I'll be waiting for you to pick which other stories of yours I can read, you better tell me soon.
| Reviewed By: Paniwi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2004 09:44 CST
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appropriate song I must say. All of us Ryou-lovers are mean. We always hurt our baby
| Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess(not logged in) On: July 05, 2004 12:13 CDT
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That song reminds me of those two too.^-^ It's good! Aww, poor Ryou.
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