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| "Toy Store FROM HELL" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] | | Pages (2): [ 1 2 > » ] | Title: Cool
Reviewed By: kalavera491 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2006 11:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this. Please update soon. And I agree you should put the K-Mart one up here. It sounds like it would be just as funny!!! ^_^
| Reviewed By: Haruko-lita On: August 06, 2004 17:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"...Seri, however, owns squat" You own squat?!?! CAN I HAVE ONE?!?! *puppy dog eyes* pweaze? *pout pout* Hee hee, just kidding! Anywho, I was wondering how long it would take you to put in the hammies! Although the thought of tiny hamsters running around in the dark of night inside a 'Toys 'R Us' is kinda creepy. *shudders like a buffoon* Oo? Buffoon? Gawd forbid. Now I am a buffoon. Actually... thats kinda cool. Wait, I'm supposed to be doing something here... what was it again?... OH YEAH! I'm supposed to be reviewing... OOPS. Oh well, I have... 946 characters to fill up this entire space with more randomness. Crapola, now its only 858. DANGIT! But yes. My goal is to use up all the characters! Whee! But yes. I much enjoyed (or muchly enjoyed? Oo?) this chapter! It was massive amusement! And I was gonna review on like, the first day that you put it out, but I kinda ran out of time to review, and dad was bumming around near the computer. *glares at dad, even though he is nowhere around* Shoot, 491 characters to go. Hmm. I am running out of conversation topics. But yes, I cannot wait for the next chapter! Really, I can't! Oh, did I mention that I can't wait for the next chapter? And the one after that, and the one after that, and the one after that! Mainly just cause I want to see where the randomness goes. (..170 characters left) Okay, so anyway, I think you and Geo did a very good job on this chapter, and I hope the chapters get even better! I wish you two the best of luck.
| Title: Nyaa!
Reviewed By: Web On: August 02, 2004 22:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*flails arms* I wanna read more! ;__; Doood. o.o Uhm, yeah. Et's teh coolies so far, j0. =) o.o I forgot to say in my description that my charrie bites, scratches, and stabs people with pointy things a lot. Annnd that's all I can think of. '-' Hope that's enough, if not, my email's TwililghtWeb@hotmail.com, spam as much as you want, but no viruses, and please pay for the space taken in my inbox with a 12 pack of Pepsi, it will be very much appreciated. Thank you very much. ^_^
| Title: Continue Descrption
Reviewed By: Chibi Trey On: August 02, 2004 16:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You wanted the description longer, uh ok. ~ Age: 12 Clothes: A black long sleeved shirt with a baggy dark grey shirt with the red Spitfire logo. black cargo pants and black and grey VANs (skateboard shoes), with hair up in a pony tail ~ I think that's it, if I forgot something, please tell me
| Title: ((Seri Geo, this is Meg))
Reviewed By: Meg18181818 On: July 23, 2004 18:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
greatttt!!!!
| Reviewed By: Kuramas_Yami_Grl On: July 23, 2004 14:50 CDT
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Hey! You asked for longer descriptions, right? Okay, I already told you what I look like with Hair, Eyes, and Height. I also gave you my personality. Now for more, I wear a cute little school girl uniform to throw people off the track that I am an evil bitch ALWAYS looking for a fight. I am really good at archery, too! My school uniform is a white shirt with sleeves that come to my elbows, a dark blue sweater vest over my white shirt, and a short plaid, i guess, skirt, black socks that come up to my knees, and black buckled shoes. I always wear my hair in two pigtails. Plus, everyone always mistakes me for a 21 year old when I am only 15. I think it is because of my bust. I am afraid of pink cuddly things, too! Well let me know what else you need. And keep up the story it is GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! | Reviewed By: Haruko On: July 23, 2004 08:26 CDT
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Don't have much time to review, must leave ASAP... but Geonah, I want your multi-colored lint! OO; Anywho, good chapter, must run, update soon!
| Reviewed By: Nenagh24 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2004 08:26 CDT
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Oh! Did you say, bribes? (Smiles) Just checking! ^^ (Twitches her nose and the reviewers hallway turns into a lounge, with the Authoress sitting at the top of a mountain of pillows watching her favorite Anime on the Maga Big screen T.V.) Waki:(Walks up with a plate of Humungus cookies of every type made) Would you like a cookie, Miss? Koso: (Comes up with an Ice cream scoop and all the flavors of Ice cream that you love) Sweet Snow--I mean, Ice Cream, Miss? Sio'an: (Pleading puppy eyes) Please put Nenagh in your story! Please? (Puppy eyes get watery) *Update soon!(Mutters)Now if you are a guy, I would feel very stupid at the moment-_-;;*
| Reviewed By: Fox-Fire431990 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2004 23:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story, anyways... Name: Tsume, Gender: female, Demon or Human: Human, Height: 5'5", Hair: Black w/ brown highlights past the shoulders abit, Eyes: brown, Personality: friendly, nice and shy and you can change anything. I don't mind. but I really wanna be in it. Well, update soon!
| Reviewed By: BloodyVampiress [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2004 23:19 CDT
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Name:Kikyou Anyakinashi Gender:Female Demon:shadow/fire/vampire Eyes:Dark blue Hair:black that stops an inch above her butt Personality:nice,caring,has a wild side,friendly, Clothing:black tanktop w/ a red pentagram in the middle w/black pants and chains Dislikes:furbies,barney,teletubies,cabage patch dolls Likes:remote controlled cars, those small little stuffed animals, likes to prank a few of her friends,likes to use maigcs Paired:Hiei or Kurama I don't know if u r doing pairings but if u aren't then that's okay wit me! i still wanna b in it! i cant wait till u update!
| Reviewed By: Inu-Hakusho Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2004 15:08 CDT
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Name: Chelci Personilty:Randome if suger is eaten.Other than that her'tude-cross tween Yukina & Hiei. Age:15 Hair:Blondeish-Brown Clothes:Blue shirt,shorts,and ugly brown sandals. Eyes:Green (Half Human and half Fox)Demon Form: SAme only two fox ears and tail
| Reviewed By: Nenagh24 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2004 14:17 CDT
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Koso: (Whacks Nenagh in the head) You forgot your personallity stupid! Nenagh: (Rubbing head) Itai! Fine! (Smiles) I'm slightly crazy, but I like to be friend with every one, unless they are stupid. Then I must shove their stupidity in their faces! BWAHAHAHA! (Stops suddenly and turns to Koso) There happy? Koso: No... Nenagh: (Prat fall)
| Reviewed By: Nenagh24 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2004 14:11 CDT
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Hey could I join too? Name: Nenagh! ^^ Appearence: ruffly 5'3" blue eyes, shoulder length dirty blond hair, Jeans and a t-shirt saying 'Kharl, the one winged angel' (A character from Dragon Knights! ^^) Wears spiked bracelets! Found in the technology section, listening to her favorite cd. Race: Human. Grender: Female (cough-duh-cough) TGI'm Female! Has done this before, uses all of their batterys and toys durring the night! ^^ Hope you use me!
| Title: Character for you!
Reviewed By: Zack! nickname Key, Honey Buns... etc... On: July 22, 2004 13:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! You probly now me as Key, as Theus has probably told you... Anyways, I have a character to submit! Name: Key Gender: Male Clothes: Big, black cloak, lots of black armor on shoulders, black boots, many black things o.o; Physical description: Ashy-white skin, white hair, pointy ears, black eyes, not at all muscly. Personality:Mysterious, shadowy, used to be a Magic Emperor, but has changed his ways since then. Uses magic and sword techniques in battle. Died at the end of Lunar 2, the game, but has been revived to be in this story! ^.^ Okey-dokey! That's it! Message me at animefreak488@aol.com, or magicalemperorghaleon@hotmail.com if you need anymore details! P.S. He's based off a character called Ghaleon from the Lunar games.
| Title: the turtles are coming
Reviewed By: rurouniturtle [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2004 13:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay well, um OC: name: Artemis, silver hair, silver eyes, shapeshifter (email me for more info), wears black baggy clothes, can't stand barbies, but has to find the right toy for her sister, personality: bubbly and happy but turns cold when people insult her pet turtles, she keeps them into her pockets, they are trained attack turtles (If anymore info is needed, email me at rurounisarecool@hotmail.com) hopefully this one will start sooner than survivorkurama
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