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| "Silent Prayers" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Title: HALLO!! ((I don't know why I'm doing this... It's Danie and Kaelie... brace yourself!!))
Reviewed By: AnimeFan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2005 03:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's past midnight ((you know what that does to my mentality)) and Kaelie and I are on a review streak. [[I sort of, kind of, pity Elf. It'll be funny to see if she actually replies.]] Yeah, I'll get an email saying STOP REVIEWING!!! :P [[Oh, it's not THAT bad... We might get one from the lady who wrote the Furuba fic, though.]] We? AH! Right, review. ((My god, nearly 2 in the morning and we haven't watch King Arthur yet.)) [[OR Monty Python & the Holy Grail! But we should.]] Dammit this is a review!! When was the last time you updated, Mel-chan? I don't remember, but I remember reading it and while I was logged on I decided to review. ... Yes... Dammit, I lost my train of thought. [[*giggle* Choo choo!!]] [[real k-chan: WHAT'S WITH THE CHOO CHOO?!]] I took literary liberty since I'm the one typing. Hush. [[Oh, I feel so loved...]] ... MEL-CHAN YOU NEED TO WRITE MORE!!!!! Finals are over so I have more time to read now! I have less homework! O.O P.E. Shit... [[It just now struck you?]] Dammit, I'll finish this rant in an email if I can stop being lazy and focus on the screen right. This is pointless to put on a review because it's not even a review any more... WHY ARE YOU NEVER ONLINE?!?! [[Oh, yes, review, Danie, review.]] .... I really am shutting up now. [[Bye-bye.]]
| Title: Interesting, very interesting.
Reviewed By: AnimeFan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 02:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry to rate you so poorly right now, but you did catch me at an ungodly hour. You e-mailed me to read this just as I was about to log off. I've only read the first chapter thus far, but I will be sure to read more in the morning. Now let me explain my ratings: Style was full of run-on sentences. Spelling and grammar: I personally think you've always type too fast and have trouble keeping up with yourself. Try and slow down or proofread. Enjoyment factor was "9" because I'm very irritable right now after that e-mail and you-know-why, and I think you should have more "action" in the first chapter. Hmm, I'm running low on characters to use before my review gets cut off, so more later. Keep in mind that this was only for the first chapter. I'm a harsh critic, but you're the one that asked me to read this, Neko-chan. Goodnight. ~~"Ookami-koto"
| Title: Eriko
Reviewed By: Beautiful Sin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 01:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
Thanks for reviewing my story and this sounds good so far, I'll review the rest later since it um kind of three in the morning now, but do keep writing.
| Title: cool
Reviewed By: kasumi the vampire queen [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 20:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was very good! great job. it was also very interesting. i don't know why more people didn't review it, because i thought that your fic was great.^_^.
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