| "Insert You with Kai" Reviews/Comments [ 47 ] |
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Reviewed By: lizardlea [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2005 16:20 CDT
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I really like it and agree with the people who say a good game of truth or dare would be cool! ^-^
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Reviewed By: NO!! EVIL WRITERS BLOCK! On: June 26, 2005 20:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm... I'm not quite sure how to help... how bout a nice game of Truth or Dare, Spin The Bottle and 7 Minutes In Heaven, of course we need more girls so how about Hilary, Salima (I hope you also make this a Salima/Ray fic because I love that couple)? UPDATE SOON! THIS IS THE FIRST You/Kai FIC I HAVE EVER SEEN ON MEDIAMINER.ORG
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Title: Where the rest!?!?!?(also have an idea)
Reviewed By: MewMewBritt On: April 29, 2005 21:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How about "I" get kippnaded by somebody & "I" get put up 4 ransome(because "im" famous & all)& they come & saves the day!!!! But kia does most of it.(also make sure he kisses "me"!!!! ^v^(& i could get hurt & kia rips a part of his shirt to make a bandge))O, 1 more thing... HURRY UP & FINISH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: 123445 On: March 17, 2005 12:12 CST
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how about 'you' get shot or sumat and kai comes and saves the day after you nearly die and 'you' and him live happily ever after in your house(mansion)
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Title: I got ideas
Reviewed By: HIEI LOVERS [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2005 20:35 CST
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How about something happens all of a sudden while they were jogging around the mansion.
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Reviewed By: Sakota On: March 06, 2005 19:40 CST
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Make "ME" slolly fall in love with kai and make me become more shady I'm too joyful! >:(
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Title: IDEA!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: dark_demon_princess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2005 19:49 CST
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how bout when they are outside, 'me' gets very, very hurt. Matbe like someone wants to get back at 'me' for losing a battle and like shoots me or something. If no likie, its ok!!!!
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Title: Ideas
Reviewed By: Nila On: January 26, 2005 18:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, listen up! This is what you should do in the next chapter. just have them go to the concert, have Kai utterly amazed by the girls' singing voice, have them go to a resturant with the girl sitting beside Kai. Okay, I admit I'm a lot like Kai, only difference is I'm a girl and I have 10% more patince than him, BUT GET THESE CHAPTERS DONE!!!!! Okay/ Okay. Bye-bye!
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Title: tin-cherry
Reviewed By: samantha On: November 11, 2004 14:10 CST
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ok please update soon you,ve got alot of ideas already and i,ve got an idea also how about a sleepover and good games of spin e bottle,truth or dare,and last but not least are favorite game 7 minutes in heaven so wat do you think please upda soon.
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Title: finish writing
Reviewed By: sango the demon neko On: October 11, 2004 16:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story!!why about a good game of truth or dare!!!because ever fic should have a good game of truth or dare!!right?*people in background**right!!! but then it's a blackout game of truth or dare!!so things start to turn out different!*hentaish smirk**o.k!!**more perverted smirk** eat a pockey**
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Title: Insert You with Kai
Reviewed By: godess-isis [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2004 07:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is ok but why don't you continue,even if you have writers block,...maby after the tean runs laps, tyson goes into the kitchen..the others takes a short breather...kai me and rai train some more or go swimming!
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Reviewed By: dark_demon_princess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 13:01 CDT
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How about someone comes knocks me out for.........uummmm.........my bitbeast!!!! Give me a break ok, i'm trin!!!!T_T
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Reviewed By: silver_neko_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2004 17:25 CDT
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Hey I luv your fic! I hope you've saved the chappies cus MM.org is deleting all self-inserts. Erm... make them train several hours a day! Make them run laps, exersize more, practise, stuff like that. And I love sharp pointy objects! Maybe you could make the reader throw knives at them and make them dogde! Erm, scratch the last idea, unless you like it, which you probably don't. ^^;
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Title: tiny-cherry
Reviewed By: samantha On: September 25, 2004 10:23 CDT
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do u know that mm.org is deleting fanfic with the reader as a charecter u can choose to put your anfic at soupfiction.net or e-fiction.org.
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Reviewed By: Chaos Owl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2004 19:24 CDT
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How about evil versions of the reader and the beybreakers from BioVault> You can have a world champion ships and those evil version of the reader and the blade breakers comes to get bit beast at the tornament? ( Evil Kai: Aki!He has Black dranzer! Evil Tyson: Ta-Kye! He has Dark Dragoon! Evil Max: ?? (Can think of Name) he has Devil Dracile! Evil Ray: Rey. He has Chaos Driger! Evil (your name!): (Think or an evil name), she has Death (Name of Bit Beast)! I Own all of the names,people, and bit beast except Black Dranzer, (your name), and Death (Name of Bit Beast), ect. )
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